|Reviews for Girls of One Nation: Book One Water|
| Larkae chapter 72 . 11/7/2013
I just wanted to say thank you so much for writing this. The things I loved most about this were the stereotypes and the flaws. It was so much fun to read. It always felt like a purely fan girly reboot of avatar that I always wish I would get of my ass and write! I understand you wanting to leave this behind and well thanks for letting us know.
I hope you continue writing though because you really are good!
| Evil' s Horcrux chapter 71 . 1/21/2013
I ABSULUTLY LOVE THIS BOOK! Sooooo 4 all of your loyle fans out there who would never even think about us to stop reading this book could you make book 2? We onestly dont mind the wait!
| Spot'sGalFrom1899 chapter 71 . 1/8/2013
It's amazing as always. I'm not even that obsessed with Avatar anymore but I still always look forward to reading this. I understand about the college thing, it's a lot of work, and I just want you finishing the story. I'm hoping you'll do the entire series, but I understand if you cannot. It's long and you're busy. Still, a girl can dream. I've been with this story for two years and it'll be coming on three soon. I really don't want it to end.
You're such a talented writer.
| Guest chapter 71 . 1/3/2013
I don't CARE
| bakaneko chapter 71 . 11/28/2012
I know I'll keep checking in to see if you updated :)
| epicavatar01 chapter 71 . 11/19/2012
Thank you for updating!
| Thomas Drovin chapter 71 . 11/17/2012
Hey there welcome back! I'm SO glad to hear you're alright after Hurricane Sandy, I was so worried as I have friends who live near where it struck. I TOTALLY understand that you might not have time to update as much as you want due to collage, we ALL have lives outside fanfiction. Just finish this book of water first and if sometime in the future the inspiration to carry on the other books comes to you can come back. Rest assured you will have me waiting for you, you've done a FANTASTIC job in my eyes and I am VERY good at waiting. Two Hundred and Twenty Five Reviews makes this SO worth it too! Rest assured I WILL wait I haven't given up on you now have I?
Now for my review...I see that you and Brianna have met the first Avatar and he's given you both his name, advice and new powers. Now you're helping Zuko despite his attempt to grab Aang, that's SO cute! Nice to see that Brianna thinks so so too. Anyway update whenever you can like I said I'll be waiting to see the end of this book at least, have a Happy Thanksgiving and and Merry Christmas in advance! Later!
| epicavatar01 chapter 70 . 11/5/2012
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY. I 3 this story
| Spot'sGalFrom1899 chapter 70 . 9/24/2012
Sorry for not reviewing faster! Damn junior year of high school is killing me.
I hope you and Brianna are good :D I miss talking to you guys.
I can't wait till Zuko shows up again :3 I still ship y'all.
Love the story as always and this chapter was particularly good :D
keep it up!
| Emerald Dynamo chapter 70 . 8/27/2012
Ok; I've just read what you have of this story and it's absolutely epic!
This is amazing...
Oh; about this chapter. Hmmm...
You have done something in this chapter that I thought no one would ever do: you took the creepiness level of the Spirit world in this episode and kicked it up a few notches.
The flower language was brilliant too...
I love what you've done with this story. You are certainly a very good writer (which is more than I can say for myself...)
Keep up the excellent writing!
| Thomas Drovin chapter 70 . 8/26/2012
Well you're as good as your word and you updated! Just what IS the Mirror of True Reflections? Is this how you and Briaana really are? Or is it showing how you COULD have been? I hope you update again soon for I need answers to my questions. The bit with the flowers was quite informative, could THEY be a clue? You have this well thought out!
See you next update with the answers, I look forward to what you have for us! Later!
| Thomas Drovin chapter 69 . 8/26/2012
Hey there welcome back! I see that Aang has gone to consult the spirits in regards to what's happening at the North Pole. The question is can you and Brianna stop Zuko from trying to take Aang away? And more importantly will you stop Yue from becoming the new Moon Spirit, or will you let it happen? So many questions and so few answers, I look forward to your next update so I can find out!
PS: Thanks for the explination on how you and Brianna can go back and forward from the spirit world as well as Aang, it makes perfect sense now. See you soon!
| Twicullenfan96 chapter 68 . 7/14/2012
I'm so excited that you updated! Although, I am kind of sad it's so short. Oh well! :D I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon please! :)
| Thomas Drovin chapter 68 . 7/12/2012
My word you update quick! I see you and Brianna are off to a good start battling Zhao's fleet. You have every reason to be nervous espically if it's your first time battling against large numbers, so far it's just been Zuko, Iroh and his followers. You can do it! See you next update to see what happens next!
PS: NONE of your chapters are lame however long or short they may be, would you have gotten over 200 Reviews if they were?
| SpotsGalof1899 chapter 68 . 7/12/2012
FANTASTIC AS ALWAYS, MY LOVE!