|Reviews for On the Fringe|
| Hanna chapter 11 . 11/26/2013
When are you doing the epilogue ?
| O.o.O.Flame Belt.O.o.O chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
I just want to say... Bravo. Really, if you were in font of me, then I will clap both of my hands for you until they bleed... and still, I won't be really giving this story enough credit. It's... amazing might not be the right word for it. This story is awesome. more than awesome, Magnificent. I just read it recently, and I must say that I am lucky to do that, because if I had to wait (six months for a chapter from you) I would be devastated and toooo eager for your liking. It's just amazing.
I adore the way you set up the plot. How you made Luke's memories all behind for him to start something new with Percy (WHO IS UNBELIEVABLY ADORABLE IS THIS FIC) I have to say that, even when Luke teases him, it's so much fun to read. I loved how you developed the relationship between both of them. and how you developed the plot as well. I mean this story was epic, and I can't think of an epic-er sequel. I also have to thank you for not letting Luke drink from that pool... I would've... died. It's enough that I was pulling my hair from frustration while reading how he went on his own.
Thank you very much for writing this golden piece, I will be waiting for the epilogue too. If you can... possibly... update... soon... then that would be great. But, let's just say that I love you and your writing either way.
AMAZING GREAT JOB! That was a fantastic story.
| Jade Lynne chapter 11 . 9/8/2013
I really like this story and I noticed it was almost complete! I hope you eventually put the epilogue up and start the sequel. I feel like Luke will feel guilt either way if/when he eventually regains memories.
| Pheonie chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
:D I wish you would continue. *favs*
| Sexy girl chapter 11 . 2/18/2013
Loved ur story and the plot. Tho I am a bit sad to hear that this is the end of the story. But I can't wait to read the sequal. Fantastic job.
| Sexy girl chapter 5 . 2/17/2013
I loved the scene where Luke confessed his live for Percy. Very awesome job
| Sexy girl chapter 4 . 2/17/2013
I like how u make things progress slow. Good plot and amazing job
| AspergianStoryteller chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
Well written and teasing.
| WalkingStranger99 chapter 11 . 12/9/2012
love the story keep it up
| WalkingStranger99 chapter 8 . 12/9/2012
| time aes nyx chapter 7 . 11/21/2012
This chapter is brilliant. It makes more sense than canon.
| Disney's Darling chapter 5 . 11/12/2012
Just discovered this story and OMFG BEST LUKERCY STORY EVER. ALL MY FEELS 3 What more can I say?
| Percival Jones chapter 11 . 10/25/2012
Okay, so i haven't read this chapter yet but i will do so after posting this review. First of all, i have to congratulate you for being the author to write the first ever Percy Jackson Fic that i can honestly say belongs to my favorite story list (and your story isn't even complete yet...). Second of all, June was the last time you updated so i wanna know if you still have plans to update this or you really just have problems in updating like i do
Now, going back to point one, the reason i want to follow this story and heck, add it to my favorites, is that it embodies a great sense of writing style that almost (if not completely) captures Rick Riordan's quirky and fun loving way of writing. You have some inside jokes, you have the right amount of thoughts of what happened in previous books and you have that cool way of making references (i love the Pokemon reference btw 3)
So yeah, keep writing if you can because you are amazing at it.
That's all i have to say for now. I'll be reviewing your work whenever you post an update from now on so impress me. hahaha
| Puri-Poke chapter 11 . 10/17/2012
Love this fic! :)
| ThorkiShipper chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
YOU SAID 'LOKI'S TAKEN OVER' OMFACKINGOSH HAHAHAAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHA LOKIIII'D