Reviews for Fuggiasco |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had a feeling that Alice’s new squeeze might be Alec. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous story. I hope darling Carlisle is ok. I hope they have a little boy. Just wonderfully written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Because of his extensive injuries shouldn’t he be still in hospital at the timeof the burial? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished reading this story and I want to say thank you so much for writing this amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it once I started. The development of characters and story line is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read quite a few stories with simar plot lines, but this one is definitely up there with the best. the character development was awesome. I'm only sad that you killed of Esme. I was also hoping we might meet Harry and Sue again in the storyI even thought they might somewhere be related to Jacob. Anyway, it was a fantastic story. I read it all in 2 days! :D |
![]() ![]() So I cried through most of this but thanks! ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finished reading this last night. And totally forgot to review. Just passing by to say I loved it. You put so much effort in the background of your stories (I just finished reading exposed) and that feels incredible. Because they are actually believable, you know? I loved this one. You are truly very talented. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey there! I know it has been a long time since you posted this fiction. I just thought that positive criticism might still be helpful for you as an author so...I mean no offence but this issue must be addressed. I am Italian. I am sorry but NONE of the sentences you used in this fiction makes any sense. so far at least. I am assuming that you used some online translator and I BEG YOU, never to use it again. this is pretty much a prayer as much as an advice. I you are still reading reviews for this fiction, feel free to PM me. I'd like very much to suggest correct italian translation, if you are interested, of course. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing this with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This. Is. Amazing. Thank you so much for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cried so much this chapter that I now have a bunged up nose and headache :D ... Also this probably sounds silly but I am desperately waiting for Edward to break and actually cry. |
![]() ![]() Wow, I loved this story. Second chances, love, family, friendship all in one great story. Thanks for your time Regards LQUEZ |
![]() ![]() It's a door JAMB, not JAM. |
![]() ![]() "Seth, you're pick, little man" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. The possessive form is YOUR. |