Reviews for Fuggiasco |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love them so much! *cries* Thank you for sharing your story with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The tears don't stop! I love them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a beautiful chapter. Two broken souls mending and loving each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just really love this story, even with all of the angst and heartache. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy hell! I figured she'd been raped, but I didn’t imagine how hoffific her situation had been. Poor thing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I first started reading this, I almost quit cuz it made me so sad! But 5 chapters in, I'm invested in these characters, and pray they find a way to get off the streets. Maybe they are stronger together? I hope so... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had a feeling that Alice’s new squeeze might be Alec. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous story. I hope darling Carlisle is ok. I hope they have a little boy. Just wonderfully written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Because of his extensive injuries shouldn’t he be still in hospital at the timeof the burial? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished reading this story and I want to say thank you so much for writing this amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it once I started. The development of characters and story line is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read quite a few stories with simar plot lines, but this one is definitely up there with the best. the character development was awesome. I'm only sad that you killed of Esme. I was also hoping we might meet Harry and Sue again in the storyI even thought they might somewhere be related to Jacob. Anyway, it was a fantastic story. I read it all in 2 days! :D |
![]() ![]() So I cried through most of this but thanks! ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finished reading this last night. And totally forgot to review. Just passing by to say I loved it. You put so much effort in the background of your stories (I just finished reading exposed) and that feels incredible. Because they are actually believable, you know? I loved this one. You are truly very talented. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey there! I know it has been a long time since you posted this fiction. I just thought that positive criticism might still be helpful for you as an author so...I mean no offence but this issue must be addressed. I am Italian. I am sorry but NONE of the sentences you used in this fiction makes any sense. so far at least. I am assuming that you used some online translator and I BEG YOU, never to use it again. this is pretty much a prayer as much as an advice. I you are still reading reviews for this fiction, feel free to PM me. I'd like very much to suggest correct italian translation, if you are interested, of course. |