Reviews for Jaws:Unleashed
LadyB.Skellington chapter 9 . 8/25/2014
Ok continuing on your story really is very good in essence that you need to make jaws less infallible, check out this guy's YouTube page that he is who help me, I know that he can help you just as good as he helped me. Please don't ever stop writing no matter what anyone tells you. watch?vlHPI0zj2gGI&featureyoutube_gdata_player
LadyB.Skellington chapter 8 . 8/25/2014
I am Not sure if this is your first attempt at a fan fiction or not but a few things first of all I am NOT saying any of this stuff to be rude or mean I'm just trying to give you a little bit of help here, second your story line is based on those 5 movies plus the game or whatever but they're actually taking from the storylines there cuz I seen all the movies played the game More on next review page

t game, yeou really need to try to develop your own story
Deleted4Good chapter 13 . 1/31/2012
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Guest chapter 13 . 10/8/2011
Well, the mayor DID set of the fireworks himself lol
Guest chapter 13 . 10/8/2011
yay you updated!
Tyraka628 chapter 12 . 7/1/2011
Pretty awesome story, with all the sea monsters and terrorizing and destruction! It's inspiring me to write my own Jaws/Piranha 3D crossover! :)
sam fraser chapter 9 . 3/4/2011
aw so cute! Depsite the rude words the animals are saying and I Don.t think you should make the sharks talk but make nosies as in saying, I loved it. It makes me think Jaws just might have had a little good in him.
sam fraser chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Im waiting!
sam fraser chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Merry Christmas!
sam fraser chapter 8 . 12/4/2010
I Got an idea. Maybe you can have Someone who hears about the failure of the armada and tries to shoot the mayor in his limo from the firth floor of a building and he does not succued in killing the mayor but wounds him or something like that
sam fraser chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I Got an idea. maybe after the battle of blood you should stop the other missions in the next chapter and have more talking to have more of a story. and maybe you should have a news report of the mayor death on the 4 of july when he blows up. and the news is like jfk.
sam fraser chapter 6 . 10/17/2010
Also I Heard that the man in the helicopter which you kill at the end of the game is called Cruz Ruddock.
sam fraser chapter 5 . 10/7/2010
IM Waiting...
Greatwhitefan53 chapter 5 . 10/5/2010
when the next chapter coming?
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