|Reviews for Torture Tears and Terrible Temptations Alt Ending|
| Katie chapter 2 . 4/2/2013
Oh my god! That was wonderful. I loved the original story so much but cried at the end. I really like this alternate ending! Amazing!
| Loonynamelass chapter 2 . 7/8/2011
Hurrah! Sort of. Except that Bellatrix is evil and DAMN IT Molly deserved the satisfaction of killing the real her.
The logistical question is "what happened to the real Astoria" and the answer is that Bella mercilessly killed/subdued her for eternity. Remorse for killing husband and wife Remus and Tonks isn't the same as, well, not killing them. Also, Bella's doppleganger easily could have just been killed without killing the Order members... The least damage would have been done. But she doesn't really care about loss of life. She just cares about her own selfish safety, which by this ending is ensured.
But for the purposes of this story, a happy ending indeed.
Thank you for the 32-chapter adventure. Now let me go purify my mind. :)
| bobhaslanded chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
aww, so soon? come on, you gave me hope with the alternate ending. i was thinking of 20 maybe 30 chapters :D
| Lamia of the Dark chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
lol, there's one explanation for who this mysterious "Astoria Greengrass" (whose name wasn't even actually mentioned IN the book) is...
| BellatrixBlackLovett chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
I smiled sooooo much reading this, I'm so happy Bella and Draco are finally together.
The last chapter made me cry, I thought Bella wasnt coming back..
It's bloody amazing!
| bobhaslanded chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
i kinda like the first ending better :D how many chapters is this gonna be? don't get me wrong, i like that this story is still going :D are going to make it fit the ending jk rowling wrote? what about astoria? well, that is if they live long enough to reach the age of ...(how old were they in the epilogue anyway?) is there gonna be a scorpius? am i annoying already? if not, i can continue :D my point is, please please please don't make it a clasic story :D
| Eryk Lestrange chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
[even more tears]
I just want them to be happy...
| Lamia of the Dark chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Hmm... a happy ending to that story just doesn't seem realistic.