Reviews for Comatose
gypsey'sFIREWHISKYgames chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
this is seriously good, im just a little confused on the everything front. It's late, I'm tired and stupid, please don't feel this is any fault of yours. XD
P chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
It should have been angel who pulled the plug.
horsegirl619 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
poor max what a sad way 2 go keep writing. this story wz good and u DO sound like JP im not calling you a middle aged man though (unless you are)
lunareclipse3 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Aw shoot. I saw what was written on the tombstone and my heart started hurting. I know its not true but still :( . That was short but the point got across. I wanna be mad at Fang but I'm too close to crying.

I love the last two lines on her gravestone, very touching :).

~Lunar

P.S. Ever read Stuck in Neutral? This reminded me of that book.
Faxisthegreatest123 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
:( so sad. :(
Nikki Ride chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
you're a good writer and all, but sorry, i just dont like fanfics where max dies. But you should keep writing, you're good.
i dont have a name chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
people to lazy to even posta review
LOLqueen chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
This is actually the first Maximum Ride fanfic I've ever read and it's pretty good! I like it. You write a lot like JP in some bits. Keep it up!