Reviews for Together
HelleBelle chapter 9 . 10/31/2013
awww
mary chapter 9 . 9/28/2013
Very good and I hope for a sequel
overninethousand chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
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Taraah36 chapter 9 . 6/16/2013
Awww so sweet! The trials and triumphs of love!
melissa chapter 9 . 5/28/2012
it wasnt bad all it was great
XxxInuYashaLoverxxX chapter 9 . 11/1/2011
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...I loved it!
lou-lou-1994 chapter 9 . 6/14/2011
great story xx I love the rinxsesh tht are set in the origional era xx ending wasnt tht bad though lol x seemed a little rushed but wa do I know XD plz keep writing, its all amazin xx
DNAstar chapter 9 . 3/27/2011
awwwwww thats cute :P you should do inuyasha's mothers and father's mating too
Caraline Fisher chapter 9 . 2/15/2011
it was very cute and sweet
internalpanthara chapter 9 . 11/9/2010
Splendid. I think you did really well on character interaction. Creative.

Concrit: I would have liked the pace a bit slower. A few more detailed descriptions. Also I feel that leaving out the POV and location primers would improve the flow. You can always add a sentance describing thier surroundings. Trust me you won't confuse your readers.
Kaykat chapter 9 . 8/21/2010
This story was really good, the Lemon was great for a virgin to write! Sessy and Rin... ahhh... I wanna have my own fluffy now!

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Raven-2010 chapter 8 . 7/23/2010
this a beautiful story awesome lemon love it" LOL Thanks for this great fic keep up the good work
Elizabeth1212 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
this is starting to make me mad look at the last sentence on chapter 1 this is but i am the one walking away with her not from her
mynameistolong chapter 9 . 7/20/2010
The ending was pretty good i love the story though i think one small chapter of like the children around 5 playing with sesshomaru and rin would be really awsome though the ending wasnt bad
KirsSweetAngel chapter 9 . 7/1/2010
i wish there was a sequel lol, because it sucks to talk about children and not the life of them and whether they were either boy or girl lol. but over all a VERY good story over all
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