Reviews for Innocent Betrayal
Ari Hikoto chapter 9 . 3/8
Ghh fuhh dmmmnit. THERE NEEEEEEDDDSSS TO BE MORE . you can't leave it here. it wasn't deleted. so just write.
ari hiko chapter 2 . 3/8
Wait would you actually kill them off... that'd probaly be mass suicide.
shitdawg chapter 9 . 2/21
Woah! This story is really good! I like your plot line for the story- it's different than most.
Question: Is this official ship Tyki and Allen or...? Not that I have any problems with that, but I'm curious and getting mixed vibes, you know? Oh! Why DOES the Earl hate and love Allen? Wisely never told Tyki and now I'm veeery interested in that.

And for the petition for ? I Googled it, word for word, but got no result.. Maybe it's over with? Or maybe you wrote the address wrong? I don't know.. I never heard of this happening before.

Another Question: I know you probably get this a lot, but when will you be updating? I don't mean to rush you, but recently I've faved and followed a large quantity of DGM stories and I'm a bit impatient. They have really good story lines and amazing writing styles! You're included, you hope on it, buckaroo!
countrylovinfangirl chapter 9 . 2/2
I think that I have a good balance in my use of technology with the rest of my life. I don’t think I will change how much I use my technology.
XxXx-Shiro-Hime-XxXx chapter 9 . 1/7
Update. You just had to leave it as a cliffhanger?
Sayanamaca chapter 9 . 12/26/2014
Love it! Can't wait to read more! I do have one recommendation, you might want to check your spelling and grammar. Other than that I absolutely love it! :-D
the-darker-side-of-things chapter 9 . 10/15/2014
rose.dulcis chapter 2 . 6/9/2014
no Romeo and Juliet! I like the story but DONT please DONT let Allen die Q.Q
lichenstein-blop chapter 9 . 5/3/2014
I want to read the rest! Pls update this year!
Neah 14th chapter 9 . 3/30/2014
Hurry up!
ascuteasme chapter 2 . 1/25/2014
Heather Johnson chapter 2 . 1/16/2014
What is going to happen to Allen? By the way good chapter.
Gray White Shadows chapter 9 . 12/31/2013
Please continue this story I really like it :)
Don't ask me what bits I like because I cannot define it. Also, I might be a tad lazy. Which makes me a hypocrite asking you for this, even if you aren't lazy and uyouve just forgotten all about this like Allen did or you have loads of school projects and stuff. But Sekkenko is mad. The mad yet still grinning type of mad u
Akurima86790 chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
What?! Why would they do that!? It gonna be a waste of talent!
Oh, btw I love your story. Please keep update!
miki565 chapter 9 . 8/29/2013
This is terrible! I really hope that the petition works! ( if it hasn't already ) Not to mention i heard real life kidnapped you. . . :( Please come back and write more! I love your idea and it would be sad to see it go.
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