|Reviews for Ruby Gloomy!|
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/2/2017
I know this was written a lifetime ago and I'm not even sure if the author will see this, but this is like an itch I gotta scratch because I feel there's not nearly enough criticism for this work. Like someone else has said before me, everything is poorly written, from the dialogue to the storyline. I know the characters are adults and all, but most adults don't find it necessary to swear every five seconds and spew insults from a South Park reject script written by an eight year old. "Penis sucker"? Honestly? You could use every curse in the book for this story, but 'cocksucker' was apparently too much?
The characters don't have to be wildly OOC to be grown ups. It doesn't have one bit of the charm the show has. Ruby is an inconsiderate, hypocritical scum bag who would leave her friends without warning to explore cities with dumb names. She told Skullboy to grow up, but she's calling him all these cringe-worthy, childish but vulgar names and as you've described, acting all evil? She's not a little devil, she's a redheaded Gothic angel who's sweet and patient. Skullboy's BS has to be the worse though. Did he seriously say heifer? Call Ruby a mental bitch? Also, you keep saying stuff like "his skull-hands" or "skull-like body." Dude, you should really say SKELETON or SKELETAL. The only skull on him is his head.
Also, honestly, what's with the stripper club scene? A male stripper just walks out unexplained and asks Ruby "can I help you?" Um, isn't he supposed to be in there working? Why is he like a staff member in a grocery store seeing if a customer needs help finding something? Doesn't she have to walk in the club for him to provide his 'services'? And then he just ditches his job to randomly walk around town with her with only a g-strap on, and the way he proposed this little stroll to her had to show the worst writing in the book. Ridiculous for someone who was in high school when writing this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
what the actual fuck did i just read
| TariqBates chapter 3 . 9/13/2014
I LOVE IT, PLEASE CONTINUE.
| xXSkyCupcakesXx chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
LOL I love it. make more chapters please!
| gamefreac chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
this was so laughably horrible i am going to assume it was a joke. . /2b3e67c53b16e667bfe7a34bedcf8800/tumblr_mi5cbkMPp M1r45a1eo1_
gonna play bingo with this fic.
| Guess who chapter 3 . 6/22/2013
Ok please finish this story and hurry I'm on the edge of my seat just waiting for the next update
| Abby Jones chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
I am freaking begging you, please continue this story. I am litterally, crying because I will die not knowing what will happen to the gang. Do you want to be a person who doesn't follow things through, are you going to be Brain Griffen from Family Guy. Dont be. GET THIS STORY DONE!
| Abbie Joness chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
In my other comment. Its suggestions on what to write about next incase your stumped. Because I have been waiting weeks for ch. 4 to come out. I REALLY want to know what could happen next.
| Abbie Joness chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
What if few days later. Skull boy comes out of the hospital, but with medication that makes him loopy. And Iris gives up her plan to make Len jealous. Also Ruby decides to come home, but depress and dissapointed because she doesn't have the heart to tell her friends that she's pregenet.
| Sunleaf chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
Can you put me in as Mint? A human/cat that has a white tail, hair, and cat ears with sea-green streaks. Eyes are same color as streaks. Wears a short white dress that goes just above her knees with no sleeves.
Is usually all happy and always cheers up those who are sad. But if you step on her tail, she goes into a fit of rage. She also has cat claws and sharp fangs. One last thing, she CANNOT resist ANYTHING cute!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
you didn't do the characters very-well skull-boy is supposed to be dreamy ruby is supposed to be jolly accept for misery you did it terribly
| KittyPie chapter 3 . 10/29/2012
Not so many '!s' man.. It ruins the whole effect of the exclamation point... It gave me a headache.
| 65Coolstorybro chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
hi,ya, jessluvsGG...i love fan fics, but i dont have an acount of my own so ah wuz just wonderin if itd be posswible you make an irisxmisery, rubyxmisery, or another rubyxskullboy( and maybe a litle more romantico)...i enjhoy reading yur fics and bye teh waey...im a guy...YEAH...DATS RITE! I LIKE ROMANTIC FAN FICS AND IM A GUY. go ahead...do yur best! insults will not affect me! (just like chuck norris!)
| Miharu Nakamura chapter 3 . 6/4/2012
I wanna know what happens next. Does Ruby return? Do Ruby and Skull Boy get together? Does Iris forgive Len? Who is in the door way? Dose Misery apologize to Frank? What happens next?
| deep throat chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
(0-0) what did I just read.