Reviews for the jackinthebox
Hairspray fan chapter 1 . 9/27
Omg, this is sweet!
t chapter 1 . 3/9/2018
snacgirl chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Wonderful! Wilbur's one of my fav's & you really captured the essence of his character. It's subtle, but he's sure not as dumb as he's often made out to be! Keep up the good work!
Yani Cardaria chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Not everyone writes in Wilbur's perspective so I quite enjoyed the read.

"Women like her had tricks that guys like him don't stock on shelves."

That is most certainly a great line. Nice job darlin'.