Reviews for Late Night Visitor
Hall of Rune chapter 1 . 5/14/2023
Honestly was not expected to get more than a full serving while browsing for a fun read during some downtime on a Sunday afternoon…but damn. The imagination really went wild and savored that one.

Hah, now on to the commentary—
What made this a lot more interesting than some typical PWP was the real connection and interplay of the character’s dynamics as well as the gentle references to the larger context of the shift in their relationship. This felt like it could actually have been a snapshot moment between them during the more mundane routines amidst all the commotion of their guild adventures. It kept the levity, depth, and heart of their relationship—though certainly with a more adult progression—while still capturing a new, wilder exploration of it. An amusing and exciting little escapade that was a delight to read.

Sometimes it’s nice to leave the drama and darkness of other tales (or realities) behind to have an enjoyable respite. Good work, looking forward to returning ~
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2021
This was so hot ,i really like lucy and natsu also .
Tchu-chan chapter 1 . 12/27/2020
I love me a passionate, aggressive Natsu! I think this is pretty much how he and Lucy would actually be as a couple. Good job and love the sexy lemon!
Ninja-Turtle Charlie chapter 1 . 4/2/2020
Absolutely love this story! I can only imagine the shopping trip that must of followed this
Aqua Rules chapter 1 . 12/11/2018
Damn that was hot to read! Loved it from beginning to end. :)
Sonic Hedgehog chapter 1 . 10/27/2018
"She got big boobies."
Ya girl chapter 1 . 6/18/2018
This is one of favs I read it like 5 times
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2017
I think you did a very good job, so much more than smut. It's sexy but you can totally connect with their emotions and their adoration for each other. This is how I would imagine them being. Hopelessly in love and totally passionate. Also way dirty! Great read.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2017
So cuuuute!️️️️️but I remember(sometimes I remember stuff randomly) that Lucy's keys can feel what she feels so does that mean...that the spirits...
Etherious Natsu20102003 chapter 1 . 6/7/2017
Reallt sexy i hope you make another one of these stories and use proper words dude like call her vagina a pussy and call his penis a cock and give a more importance to boobs and state there like he sucked her boobs at bit her nipple her boobs were so big natsu stroke his cock inside and outaide her pussy and that kind of thing duse anyways a good story my cock is standing up right now the dark kbight rises lol i expect you make of these
kkk chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
Shelby chapter 1 . 4/28/2017
Fairy tail Should get attached and lucy gets stolen and stripped of her clothes and almost raped but nastu saves her and then lucy wants nastu to plug into her and erza sees it and gray pops up and erza jumps on gray and begs him to be inside her so he does because erza is scary all the time unless she's with jellal P.S. DO IT OR I WILL KILL YOU!

P.S. I won't actually kill you I just really want people to see it and I'm a horrible writer please do it
anikkajen chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
That's our Natsu! An animal even in bed! Hahahaha great job in this fic. I'll try not to think how you got the inspiration for this. Hahahahah
FanfictionQveen chapter 1 . 3/3/2017
lol I felt like I was reading a porn video with that! I feel so alive!
GemNika chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
I've really fallen out of love with Natsu and Lucy since reading the current arc... Okay, and because I'm crack-shipping trash that pairs her with everyone BUT Natsu lol - but this was hot as hell! So glad I took the chance on this because it was so worth it!
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