Reviews for Late Night Visitor
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24
I think you did a very good job, so much more than smut. It's sexy but you can totally connect with their emotions and their adoration for each other. This is how I would imagine them being. Hopelessly in love and totally passionate. Also way dirty! Great read.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8
So cuuuute!️️️️️but I remember(sometimes I remember stuff randomly) that Lucy's keys can feel what she feels so does that mean...that the spirits...
Etherious Natsu20102003 chapter 1 . 6/7
Reallt sexy i hope you make another one of these stories and use proper words dude like call her vagina a pussy and call his penis a cock and give a more importance to boobs and state there like he sucked her boobs at bit her nipple her boobs were so big natsu stroke his cock inside and outaide her pussy and that kind of thing duse anyways a good story my cock is standing up right now the dark kbight rises lol i expect you make of these
kkk chapter 1 . 5/4
nice
Shelby chapter 1 . 4/28
Fairy tail Should get attached and lucy gets stolen and stripped of her clothes and almost raped but nastu saves her and then lucy wants nastu to plug into her and erza sees it and gray pops up and erza jumps on gray and begs him to be inside her so he does because erza is scary all the time unless she's with jellal P.S. DO IT OR I WILL KILL YOU!

P.S. I won't actually kill you I just really want people to see it and I'm a horrible writer please do it
anikkajen chapter 1 . 4/15
That's our Natsu! An animal even in bed! Hahahaha great job in this fic. I'll try not to think how you got the inspiration for this. Hahahahah
FanfictionQveen chapter 1 . 3/3
lol I felt like I was reading a porn video with that! I feel so alive!
GemNika chapter 1 . 2/12
I've really fallen out of love with Natsu and Lucy since reading the current arc... Okay, and because I'm crack-shipping trash that pairs her with everyone BUT Natsu lol - but this was hot as hell! So glad I took the chance on this because it was so worth it!
miss.sexysmartypants chapter 1 . 2/4
Write a story about when they tell them
DANIELLE chapter 1 . 11/11/2016
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SEXY I LOVE IT !
Jay chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
Woah, so descriptive! Great story! Wonder if u could do one of her giving birth?
AquamarineX chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
Over 900 reviews...?! What kind of sorcery IS this?! Must read the smut nowwww!
LoveIsNotAChoice chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
Such beautifully written smut! Bravo!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
Awesome story I would love to read more
xvampirecatx chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
that was great! i could feel the intensity of the emotion 3 Go team Nalu!
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