Reviews for The Short Human Life of Edward Masen
DLVI chapter 5 . 1/24/2012
This is great! I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews.
The Green Archer chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
You did a good job on this! And I'm not too upset that Edward was OOC considering he probably changed a lot in the years he spent as a vampire. You captured his thoughts very well, and also liked how you showed insight into his mother's overprotectiveness and Carlisle's struggle to turn him into a vampire. It really made me sympathize with Edward losing his family and his chance to serve in the war. Again, good job! If you are going to continue this then I look forward to reading more :)
DawnBeforeTwilight chapter 5 . 1/2/2011
I like it
00000000000000000000000000001 chapter 5 . 9/1/2010
update :D