Reviews for Help Me
Guest chapter 5 . 10/11
To be perfectly honest, I have never understood why Stark would die of palladium poisoning. He has an electromagnet in his chest, and that can be powered by any kind of electricity. Yes, an arc reactor would give a huge amount of mobility, but honestly, is it that hard to plug yourself into the wall socket for a detox? That plot device is sort of ridiculous. No offense to your fic, I was just ranting at Marvel for being silly.
FriendLey chapter 15 . 8/26
Really enjoyed this!
TheNamelessOne chapter 2 . 12/12/2015
It's a great story so far, but it ruins the chapter (always does for me) when the author uses YOU'RE instead of YOUR. Ugh, sorry it's a pet peeve of mine. Basically in that line you are saying, 'You are...you are arc reactor?' when it should read 'Your...your arc reactor?'. So many authors make this mistake and it is absolutely stupid (I am not saying you or your writing is stupid). It just really bugs me. I look forward to reading the rest.
Houndini chapter 13 . 9/4/2015
NO! In he movie she managed to be the Stark CEO and his girlfriend just fine'
Tithi chapter 12 . 9/4/2015
Loved Tony's letter to Pepper. Now I'm off to read the sequel. :)
aem91 chapter 15 . 2/23/2015
Loved the story, kept me on my toes.
GlOmP3R chapter 15 . 10/28/2014
Loved this so much! Kickass job.
LokiLove24028 chapter 10 . 9/22/2014
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nancyozz chapter 14 . 8/30/2014
Love the happy ending
nancyozz chapter 13 . 8/30/2014
Thank god...it's about time we loyal readers got our kiss...long overdue
nancyozz chapter 12 . 8/30/2014
Oh come on...now you're just torturing us...Tony needs to just grab her and kiss her
nancyozz chapter 11 . 8/30/2014
Oh you tease...you just love leaving us with cliffhangers...so glad pepper finally admitted her feelings
nancyozz chapter 10 . 8/30/2014
Please cure Tony already...I can't take much more lol
nancyozz chapter 9 . 8/30/2014
Powerful chapter...just gut wrenching
nancyozz chapter 8 . 8/30/2014
This roller coaster ride is going to kill me...I need happy times soon
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