Reviews for Ice Cream
MagatsuIza chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
SUPER! It's a shame your work has least reviews when it must have more. But still your job is SUPER!
KarakuRoku chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
You sir, must be a wolf hiding in sheep's clothing (or something, I forgot how it went) and to prove that, you say this isn't your best romance work. Really? It isn't? You must be lying!

... Because I would've said it is. It's sweet. Too sweet. Oh no, something's coming up. I'm getting a toothache. GAAAHH!

... Well, not that it's a bad thing. Means the story's good. I mean awesome. I mean wonderfully epic.

I'm not exaggerating right?

Lot's of fluff here and there, especially the ending. Huzzah for winners and RokuShi!
NinjaxSketcheartx chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Oh, this is so beautiful! I truly adore it and I love how you ended it! Your writing is one of the greatest that I've seen so far on this site! So vivid, its as if I'm actually there!

Good job! D
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Best. Story. Ever
videogamer93 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
cute
adiosToredor chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
at first i was confused but great ending!
Hope for Love chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Great story as it brought tears to my eyes. Xion totally should have been Kairi's Nobody instead of Namine.
NagiraAkisa chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Aw~ So cute! Nice story! I hope u can write more! X3
Sentinel07 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
That was very well done.

The only real problem I had is that you should title when the POV changes (like from Roxas' to third person and such). Also, it felt kind of rushed near the ending.

Anyway, it was still an excellent one-shot! Nice work!