Reviews for A Reluctant Heroine
RinnaZevran1987 chapter 11 . 9/26/2016
Love It.
Regin chapter 11 . 7/19/2014
I Like, I Lust, I love!Please Update Soon!
TheGirlNamedTakara chapter 11 . 7/4/2013
This story is soooo good so far! When are you gonna update it, I can't wait! :D
ChinaDollMaiden chapter 11 . 12/19/2012
Birdymain chapter 11 . 12/17/2012
I like this chapter much better. It makes much more sense. XD
Taligurl chapter 11 . 12/17/2012
Much much better, the flow is better and her interactions with others are better
McVinster chapter 3 . 12/17/2012

Due to the fact I seem to have written a bit of this while I was in a coma or something (seriously I don't rememeber making Lil regret saving Shepard, he's like a big brother to her), I'm going to re-write the last couple of chapters, and hopefully they'll fit a little better.

SO STAY TUNED! I promise there will be more light-heartedness, because I've already written it in! No really stay tuned for lulz with Joker ;)
Mio chapter 11 . 12/16/2012
I think everyone that has reviewed thus far are refering to Lil as being,...well I don't really want to repeat the term truthfully,as such because she is complaining about saving the commander. The loss of a body part and having it replaced with a synthetic one can make anyone sour which is quite understandable. When she began having regrets on saving the commander's life is when their opinions changed. When I read through this story I was interested up until she began to have regrets on saving the commander, that was where I began to get confused as to what the character's personality was.
Javik chapter 11 . 12/13/2012
I find myself needing to wash my hands (and my eyes) after reading this "story". This "lil" person seems unlikable and possibly insane (even by primitive standards) I recommend you throw it out of the airlock commander
Nemo chapter 11 . 12/13/2012
Ok how about this . Lil needs to be more understanding, as do you. Look back over your last post from an objective view point. She was being unnecessarily mean to thane and the fact she must be emotionally unstable cause she regrets saving someone's life. Now mourning the loss of her hand is one thing but that is another. A good writer shouldn't act the way you do your character is obviously unlike able . If you were a good author you would take all of us seriously and give lil a better attitude your story with her the way she is is horrendous and depressing. I wouldn't be friends with or date or fall in love with someone like her
Anonymous chapter 11 . 12/13/2012
Lil is a bitch thane was being nice to her. And then she acted like a bitch judging him for his past and being mean and bitchy to him. And then the fact she regrets saving Shepard cause now she has respect( wich wouldn't last long considering the way she is acting, if this was irl I'd shoot her in the head) stupid melodramatic bitch
McVinster chapter 11 . 12/13/2012
Erm, I'm sorry but I don't see how people are finding Lil to be such a bitch? That's definitely not how I wrote it to be! Jesus I just think you guys seem to like thinking the worst of everyone. Perhaps be a bit more constructive rather than saying things like "you suck" because that really isn't helpful, it's just pathetic.

Thane is supposed to be a nice chap, but Lil hasn't spent all that much time around him, so she doesn't know him at all. Wouldn't you be a bit scared if an assassin was following you around?
Well I don't have to justify my writing choices to anyone but myself so I don't know why I'm bothering.

Random reader chapter 11 . 12/10/2012
I can't really say something good about the main character really. At first she was alright up until she begins to regret saving her own captain and becomes an out right...well, bitch basiclly. I don't mean to be a bad reviewer, but it just feels like you really hate the character you created.
Nonaligned chapter 11 . 12/9/2012
I'm lil and I saved Shepard from certain death and now I have the respect of the crew boo hoo hoo my life sucks. And then this really hot drell that has taken an interest in me tries to be understanding and nice to me but then I act like a bitch to him because I'm racist and unforgiving of people's past a past that they gave up and hate. Oh and I just love whining and bitching about my life cause I want attention, and I pretend to not want attention but I really like it but I'm not that good and fake inch emotions cause I'm a narsisisict personality disorder freak bitch from hell
Lots and none chapter 11 . 12/6/2012
Wow you suck. Why do people like you think relationships must start with tons of misunderstandings. You make lil into a bitch from hell
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