Reviews for What If?
Maddy1014 chapter 9 . 9/23/2012
Pretty pretty please do an Elena was bitten as a child part 3! I absolutly loved the idea and how it was written but you can't leave it like that. Clay and Elena have to become mates. Please write a part 3!
A.Mahalia chapter 17 . 8/6/2012
I'm addicted. Enough said. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
alliycat3101 chapter 17 . 8/2/2012
You should do another one short on this one again. I like it would be cool if you did. 'Cuase this one was amazing. :D
alliycat3101 chapter 16 . 7/29/2012
Awe. That's so sad. I'm so glad that didn't happen in the book.
A Person chapter 12 . 4/11/2012
Pure. Genius. I'm glad I'm not the only one who wants to beat Bella with a stick. ;)
yourfriendlyneighborhoodturtle chapter 15 . 10/2/2011
Aw, I just love Jeremy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
A.Mahalia chapter 15 . 9/30/2011
wow... thats so sad... :'(

Very great job! Amazing ideas! Can't wait for an update!
A.Mahalia chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
I like the ending ;) Never thought Lucas could be funny... Great job!
A.Mahalia chapter 8 . 9/30/2011
That is hilarious. You're a great writer. Great Job!
ninjascantswim chapter 9 . 8/25/2011
Man, I really wish you'd write a longer story based around your Elena was bitten as a child idea... or a Elena/Daniel story...

I love reading your what ifs... wish I could write something like that, but I'd much rather read it than write it... :)
maveldiaz chapter 13 . 8/7/2011
That last line seriously made me laugh.
fragile star chapter 12 . 5/24/2011
Ahaha! Oh my goodness. You need to make another oneshot about Twilight and Clay.

LOL. "Do yourselves a favour and lay off the body glitter." EPIC. EPIC.
maveldiaz chapter 5 . 5/18/2011
I can't beleive I hadn't read this chapter, its beautiful! Would you ever continue it?
doodlechick12 chapter 12 . 5/16/2011
That was funny. Loved it!
mitzyspain chapter 12 . 5/16/2011
I had a lot of fun reading it
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