Reviews for New Beginnings
LeoTheSage chapter 1 . 1/31
Story just started and I already want to throw up
Dragoncyber22 chapter 8 . 5/3/2016
continues the story
cegi85 chapter 7 . 3/13/2016
Aversome.
Josh Skinner chapter 4 . 12/16/2015
this story is great and by the way you should put shion in the
harem. i'm curious about what kind of devil arm moryo could become.
Madgormley chapter 8 . 9/22/2014
Excellent story i really hope to see more updates for this
Potterformers chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
of course you can use my concepts, in fact the HarryXBen 10 crossover concept is up for adoption for a sequel!
Stranger Glass chapter 8 . 10/28/2013
Bravo, Bravo! Well done young man. Just so you know Nero's wife's name is Kyrei. Keep up the good work.:)
Potterformers chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Concept rental approved, but not word for word and maybe make it a crossover more.
Devilsummoner666 chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
Nice story but u might wanna work on flow a little bit, as well as dialogue and maybe the transitions, and add in some stuff with him just relaxin with his girls or learnin to use the devil arms
simhead75 chapter 8 . 5/1/2013
could be an interesting story look forward to more
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 8 . 4/10/2013
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I think Kurotsuchi should be in the harem.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
make this a mass harem but without Sakura and hinata there are too many fanfictions with them being together with naruto and its getting annoying seeing so many of those fanfictions
somone chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
great start and I wish up luck with the rest of the fic
DonPJuan chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
keep up the great work.
merceralex117 chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
MOAR PLZ! :3
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