|Reviews for New Beginnings|
| LeoTheSage chapter 1 . 1/31
Story just started and I already want to throw up
| Dragoncyber22 chapter 8 . 5/3/2016
continues the story
| cegi85 chapter 7 . 3/13/2016
| Josh Skinner chapter 4 . 12/16/2015
this story is great and by the way you should put shion in the
harem. i'm curious about what kind of devil arm moryo could become.
| Madgormley chapter 8 . 9/22/2014
Excellent story i really hope to see more updates for this
| Potterformers chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
of course you can use my concepts, in fact the HarryXBen 10 crossover concept is up for adoption for a sequel!
| Stranger Glass chapter 8 . 10/28/2013
Bravo, Bravo! Well done young man. Just so you know Nero's wife's name is Kyrei. Keep up the good work.:)
| Potterformers chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Concept rental approved, but not word for word and maybe make it a crossover more.
| Devilsummoner666 chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
Nice story but u might wanna work on flow a little bit, as well as dialogue and maybe the transitions, and add in some stuff with him just relaxin with his girls or learnin to use the devil arms
| simhead75 chapter 8 . 5/1/2013
could be an interesting story look forward to more
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 8 . 4/10/2013
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
I think Kurotsuchi should be in the harem.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
make this a mass harem but without Sakura and hinata there are too many fanfictions with them being together with naruto and its getting annoying seeing so many of those fanfictions
| somone chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
great start and I wish up luck with the rest of the fic
| DonPJuan chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
keep up the great work.
| merceralex117 chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
MOAR PLZ! :3