Reviews for He doesn't deserve a bad rap
KingsIndian chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Great start! I wouldn't say the punctuation was "confusing"; I could follow it without any problem. However, a agree that you do a very good job of describing their emotions.

Definitely continue!
Moochiecat chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Nice! It's bit confusing with punctuation, but man, the emotions are right on!