|Reviews for Control|
| Yulandia chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
whoa! You got me there. I immediately assumed these were Artemis's thoughts due to the content. Until I got to the last line, that is. Then I read it again. Wow. I love how how you did this. Jarlaxle is so private, even in his own thoughts it seems. So for me this was a surprise ending. Unlike Artemis, I like surprises. :)
| Lady Annikaa chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Very well done!
| jarltreri chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
aww... reading the beginning reminded me of how much background Jarlaxle and Artemis have in common, both struggling for recognition and survival in harsh societies, because I could just bareley tell it was Jarlaxle's POV in the first paragraph. It was great reading a serious Jarlaxle precisely cause he presents such a jovial face to the world..
| Nuitari Aquarius chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
You grasped the character. Once more. That's a simple (or so it seems!) explanation on the surface, but it relies on so much more doubts and sufferings... Well, congrats.
And that last word. What a way to end (?) things.