|Reviews for Revelations and Heartache|
| Goldielover chapter 14 . 3/4/2015
I enjoyed this story, and am glad to see it looks like she will end up just with Carlisle. (Not really an Edward fan.) It would be nice if this story were to be finished some day, but at least there is a hint of resolution to it as it is.
| EdwardAnthonyMasenCullen1918 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Great start! I don't know if someone has told you already or you found out but a Lemon is a sex scene :)
| JennC32 chapter 14 . 9/6/2010
I am anxious to see what happens with Bree and Edward and the Volturi. Thanks for sharing.
| revbev353 chapter 14 . 9/4/2010
I love this story :)
Carlisle is so hot :P
| kouga's older woman chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Poor Edward! They need to take Bree someplace else!
| IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Love the update! :)
| acw1 chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Good chapter, I was hoping it would have worked out for the 3 of them.
| Kathy Hiester chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Wonderful! Great chapter!
| LadyLeya chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Great chapter! I was so happy to see an update. ]
| DarkMoon2222 chapter 13 . 8/23/2010
i loved it. please add more soon
| Snowdrop-143 chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
Seriously she has to ditch Edward now how could he do thst he can be so goddamn selfish!
Love JAsper though! Could we just maybe bring Emment to riley things up abit? 'gg*
haha She has to rediscover vamps.. ha I could imagine her fallin for alice at this rate XDDD
Oh yeah I seriously doubt the threesome will work lets pair Edward off with Bree?
| acw1 chapter 13 . 8/8/2010
I am hiping that we get back to bella carlisle and edward together and tear bree to pieces and have a bonfire soon.
| Kingswear chapter 13 . 8/8/2010
| Babe Pryor chapter 13 . 8/7/2010
whoa! well, if the Volturi slip in, they may force Bree to either join them or die..well, she may say yes, only if they agree to let her take Edward with her as well..Carlisle may demand that Bree take off the mind control and let Edward take back his memories..could go either way..easier to let Edward go, but, is that the correct way to go? The Volture has always coveted Edwards gift as well, so they'd love that..they also know that Edward has always rejected the volturi in the past..so yes, I'd say a lemon is coming..LOL xx
| LadyLeya chapter 13 . 8/6/2010
Great chapter! Ah..Bree...she's an still young and has a crush.. Can't wait for the next chapter.