Reviews for Revelations and Heartache
tamwhit chapter 14 . 4/18/2017
Please update your story soon
angelaroberts202 chapter 14 . 3/27/2017
Even if she said she wants to be with Carlisle in the end, it doesn't make up for what happened in the past few chapters. Horrible story. My opinion
angelaroberts202 chapter 9 . 3/27/2017
Okay... I cannot favorite this story. I strongly (understatement) hate Edward. I hate Edward/Bella even more! This isn't labeled as an Edward/Bella and that's misleading af
angelaroberts202 chapter 8 . 3/27/2017
Wtf! What kind of story is this? Bella is a slut. Sorry not sorry. Why is she calling them BOTH her mates? To take away from the fact that she's whoring around with them both? Is there no such thing as commitment? Wtf
angelaroberts202 chapter 7 . 3/27/2017
Lol how I'd Bella upset when she's the won whoring around?
Goldielover chapter 14 . 3/4/2015
I enjoyed this story, and am glad to see it looks like she will end up just with Carlisle. (Not really an Edward fan.) It would be nice if this story were to be finished some day, but at least there is a hint of resolution to it as it is.
EdwardAnthonyMasenCullen1918 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Great start! I don't know if someone has told you already or you found out but a Lemon is a sex scene :)
JennC32 chapter 14 . 9/6/2010
I am anxious to see what happens with Bree and Edward and the Volturi. Thanks for sharing.
revbev353 chapter 14 . 9/4/2010
I love this story :)

Carlisle is so hot :P
kouga's older woman chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Poor Edward! They need to take Bree someplace else!
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Love the update! :)
acw1 chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Good chapter, I was hoping it would have worked out for the 3 of them.
Kathy Hiester chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Wonderful! Great chapter!
LadyLeya chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Great chapter! I was so happy to see an update. ]
DarkMoon2222 chapter 13 . 8/23/2010
i loved it. please add more soon
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