|Reviews for Double Trouble|
| catsblood15 chapter 3 . 3/4/2016
I really love this, my only complaint is how you have it set up by jumping between the characters, it makes it a Lil confusing but other wise I freaking love it and I hope you continue this...please!
| JBubbles chapter 3 . 5/25/2011
Hello, good day to you!
I'm linking this fic, it has everything that one could hope for: a good trama and sexy boys and incest!
But maybe you could make longer chapters?... so that the wait wouldn't be that terrible. And, oh my god, the preview for the next chap broke my mind.
| 019293 chapter 3 . 4/30/2011
Oooo~ Can't wait for the next chapter! *o* Thank you for the awesome up-date! - Loved the lemon, please make another but with Yami and Atemu, or Seto and Seth. xD :D Thank you! -Gives dang3r0usl0v3 a cookie-
| TearfullPixie chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
| angels cry018 chapter 2 . 4/17/2011
*wait for a minute*
- that was hawtness! OMG! SetoxYami and SethxAtemu
i was content with that but when i read the second chapter my nose was bleeding! OMG AtemuxYami is so hawt!
- AtemuxYami! :DDDDD (my favorite part!
"Hello is this Duke?…Hi, it's Yami from across the street… Yes we did meet the other day… Actually could you possibly come to the café in the morning tomorrow… Cool, I'll see you then." Yami smirked as he watched Atemu shake his head in feigned disgust. "Come on now Yami. The poor guy doesn't even know what he's gotten himself into."
"It's okay big brother, he won't be able to resist this, so it'll be worth it," Yami said as he gestured to his body.
"I can barely resist it myself," Atemu admitted as he pressed a kiss onto Yami's forehead.
"I love you Atemu," Yami whispered as he snuggled up to Atemu's toned chest.
"…I love you too…"
and in addition to that you put in SethxSeto! OMG! that is FOUR TIMES THE HOTNESS!
Chapter 3: New love
"Ahhhh, Seth… S-stop!" Seto moaned as Seth sucked on his right nipple, "Someone might come in you bastard, the door isn't locked."
Seth chuckled. "Then you'll just have to be quite while I finish my business here won't you?"
QUADRUPLE EXCITEMENT! SETHXSETO! ATEMUXYAMI! SETOXYAMI! SETHXATEMU! KYAAAAAAAAA!
please update soon or else my hyper mode is going to die out meaning i'll go back to being dull and with no reason to live...
| 019293 chapter 2 . 4/17/2011
Lol! I love This story! xD Monarshipping, Prideshipping, Scandelshipping, more! :D Thank you! - Can't wiat for New love!
| 019293 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Ooooo I love this so far and now I also want to read New Troubles! :D Thank you! -
| WaTer AlChEMist chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
PLEASE UPDATE! its so intresting!
| Michiru-pyon chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Ahh ~ I honestly know nothing about
Yu-Gi-Oh. (x Haha, but don't worry!
I shall continue with my review! This
is a great first chapter. I don't see
why you beat yourself up about this!
(This is Brittney by the way ~) You
don't overuse any words and you make
everything easy to understand. It's
perfect. You also have a good plot and
I'm going to guess that the characters
aren't out of character. I wouldn't know.
Actually, give me a minute. -starts reading
about Yu-Gi-Oh.- Okay! I'm back and from
what I read, Seto is definitely in
character. Of course, not the gay part.
I'm not sure if he's gay, but it's
your story. Your imagination. :D I
couldn't find any useful information
on Seth, but I'm sure he's in character
too. Overall, I can't wait for the next
chapter and I'm hoping you'll update soon!
There were a few grammar and spelling
mistakes, but.. I could hardly care less.
They're so tiny, you could barely tell.
You can always fix it though. Or get
a beta reader. If that's what you want.
Okay. I'm rambling now. xD I'll be
waiting for the next chapter! Keep
updating! ( I'm putting this story
on my story alert. (x )
| Yu-Gi-Oh Yaoi Cutie chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
screw vampire knight contiue if u dont i will scream dont udare leeve it like that i was expecting so much more dont disapoit your prideshipping fans
make more !
| Yami Ace and Neko chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
keep going dont leave it like that
| secretshide chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Seth and seto together hawtness :O you have to continue this .
| Lollipop chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
U shud continue riting this story cuz I can't wait 2 read it
| meaghanhill93 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa this is to cute you must must update it soon
| XxStillxShexCriesxX chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
please finish it was good... it was funny too... please please continue.