Reviews for Dutiful Child
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 5/22
Excellent way for a payback.
Archimand chapter 1 . 1/14
wasnt sure if to laugh or just say dayum son but that was both beutiful and inspiring.
beulah2013 chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
Love it!
thegovernancedropbox chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
Just the right levels of brutal and bitter.
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
while played for laughs, ranma has clearly had a disturbed childhood...
JannaKalderash chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Well, that's one way to pay them back after having such a crap life! Even if he was being respectful as was expected of him.

Yeah, right!
SpiralAK chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Revenge is a dish best served cold. And Ranma served that dish really well. And really, the guy deserves to get some retribution. And this is better than violently killing his parents or something. So good job on writing the story.
GriffithsKing101 chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
I like this. This is really good.
roughstar333 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
kinda sad yet realistic way of what could have happened to ranma and the rest of the cast
Ashen Author chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
This is perfect. A real monkey's paw thing in that Ranma gives everyone what they want and they hate it. I like this sooooo much better than usual revenge fics where Ranma turns into a cold-blooded killer or ruins everyone's lives. Because really, if they're as bad as this, they're not worth the effort.
koolkame chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Brilliant. He did his duty to his parents alright, it just doesn't require him to love them. Good for Ranma.
Where the gras is greener chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Huh. That was succinct and to the point. I liked it. I could hew and haw at you for not showing or explaining the training and events that made Ranma supersede all his peers and superiors in martial prowess, but that is not the point. So, yeah, you did good.
Larry Huss chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
A very unlikely story, but one almost anyone who followed the manga or anime can only praise.

yours Larry Huss
cakemaster chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
not much to say exept: WIN!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
"Seppuku contract, signed with a six year old's finger-painting."
Dark line. Dark concept in general, really. The first section was particularly impressive. This was a great deconstruction of the series, ending with sweet justice served with a side of sadistic revenge. I found this fic through TV Tropes' Deconstruction Fic page, and I'm quite happy I decided to follow the link.

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