Reviews for The Warlord |
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twimama77 chapter 6 . 6/8/2010 so very nice |
theunnoticedgirl chapter 5 . 6/7/2010 why havent you updated in forever your story is supeer good i need to know if jasper gets bella! ahh pleez update soon! |
sarcastic-pies chapter 5 . 6/5/2010 i love the story so far |
tainaprq chapter 5 . 6/4/2010 Mmm... I like this Jasper |
frlarsson chapter 5 . 6/3/2010 Loved the chapter, ) and Domsper best wishes, Linda |
rosedragonamber chapter 5 . 6/1/2010 loved it |
Stashio chapter 5 . 6/1/2010 again best dominant jasper ever can't wait for next cvhappy hopefully they get together soon |
JXB Addicted chapter 5 . 6/1/2010 Jasper is being such a hard ass! I hope Bella melts his heart soon! That was great! Update soon! JXB %) |
Vani88 chapter 5 . 5/31/2010 Lovely story... I like dominant Jasper... I just hope he gets rid of Alice soon as that seems a littlecold-hearted |
gredelina1 chapter 5 . 5/31/2010 He's good at what he does... He's definitely Darksper in this story. Whenever I think that he might have a sliver of sweetness in him it quickly get's shot down and he's really all bad ass! |
gredelina1 chapter 4 . 5/31/2010 This is getting better and better! I can't wait to see what happens when Peter and Charlotte arrives! "He was happily digging his own grave, and I was handling him the shovel with a beaming smile." - evil and hilarious! |
Vani88 chapter 2 . 5/31/2010 Sounds like a great beginning already |
gredelina1 chapter 3 . 5/31/2010 Oh god, Jasper is diabolical! I love how easily he manipulates everyone (especially Edward)! The whole "females shall obey without questions" thing is extremely disturbing (except when it concerns sexual matters...then it's extremely sexy)! |
gredelina1 chapter 2 . 5/31/2010 I love the plot you've come up with! It's very creative and it feels 'authentic and realistic' (if you can use those words in the context of vampires!) The idea of the Volturi to plan ahead and keep up with human development is brilliant and it definitely sounds like something they would do. |
gredelina1 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010 Wow, this was different! I loved this first chapter and I'm very intrigued! |