| Reviews for The Warlord |
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   Giggles2010 chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 Luv |
| twimama77 chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 very cool |
| twimama77 chapter 1 . 5/20/2010 so cool |
| slytheringrl17 chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 i like it |
| Azrael Blood chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 AWESOME! I've read this at skool n i was like "i wanna leave a review but the skool internet sucks" (lol im not stuck up just some1 who doesnt have that much friends) so im finally reviewin this. I truly love this and think you did/so an amazing job. Thank you and Laterz! |
| Calliso chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 Awesome story so far..I like how you have created another name for Jasper. The warlord just fits so well the God of War and Major are good too but it is nice to have something else to call him. And damn he is such a manipulative ass but gotta love him. I do sincerely hope though that while he will expect complete submission from Bella that he wonlt take it so far that she wonlt even be allowed to express her opinions and stuff. I wonder too how well Bella will take to being so submissive? I get the feeling at first she might not be too thrilled with the idea..but then again who knows? I too wonder what Alice knows and how much she knows of Bella and Jasper. Does she know Bella is Jaspers true mate? I wonder how she will react since Jasper did say she was very possessive she might not the idea of another woman coming in to take her place. Though Isabella is not really taking her place because she will be so much more then that. Alice has really just been Jaspers pawn someone that has been useful for him. I do wonder though if Alice will continue to be so loyal to him throughout the story hopefully she will. Anyway update soon! |
| JXB Addicted chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 That was really good! I can't wait to read more! JXB %) |
| Crafton chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 I like devious Jasper. Awesome story keep it up. |
| sghb716 chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 This sounds like an awesome story. Looking forward to more. Hope you update very soon. |
| yankeerose chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 I'm feeling kinda sad for Edward...he is being played and so is Bella...but Jasper can play me anyday :) |
| Sassy Mami chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 Dominant Jasper, yummm. I hope he doesnt turn to mean when he finally claims her and let her be herself w/o being a 100% submissive. I cant wait to read more. Please update soon ) |
| LuvAnime4-Ever chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 really good story cant wait for the next chappie! |
| Sassy Mami chapter 1 . 5/20/2010 Very interesting first chapter. I cant wait to continue and read more. |
| Btterflykiss69 chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 So loving this story. |
| Rpattzobsession chapter 3 . 5/20/2010 ooooohhhh hurry up and tell bells already and update asap! |