All right I’m done. This is sick seriously. This story is making me so inconfortable… Your Jasper is some kind of abuser, a manipulator gaslighting everybody, primarily Bella on the excuse she is his mate, and calling it love. I can’t read this, even if your writing is really good and the different take on people reactions interesting, it makes me feel miserable. I will keep it at that and wish you the best.

Wowza ! I really found this story late. I love it ! I hope you finish one day cause I couldn’t stop reading this.

Por Dios como nos dejas así, en el capítulo 31 o 32, prometiste que ibas a terminar la historia, por favor, damos los últimos capítulos, hemos esperado muchos años, cualquier cosa mi correo . muchas gracias

Aquí, en esta parte, no me gusta el comportamiento de Jasper, el hecho de que Alice no sea su compañera real no implica que le hagas esas cosas con la excusa de que están bien. Me gusta mucho como es Emmett, sabe respetar. Ojalá Bella logre domar a ese dinosaurio, me encantaría verlo convertido es un vampiro amoroso, educado y viendo a su pareja como su igual.

Ya lo dijo una vez Bella, ni que ud fuera el papá para obedecer, creo que tienes algunos conceptos un poco cavernicolas Jasper

Se que la historia está congelada, me gusta la trama, amo a Jaspet, solo me molesta que quiera una mujer sumisa, ahí si no, ojalá que lo que me falta de leer, el sumiso sea él. Xq en una pareja debe haber igualdad.

he should have shoved one of his own arms up his ass so there was only one to carry.

Oh Jasper, you sly dog!

WOW! Jasper is going to be the man in charge. does Alice know?

only one chapter to go and you don't complete it? I'm so confused. you wrote a wonderful story, why leave it like this? please please even after all these years finish it. you write wonderful stories, you put so much time into them to just leave it hanging. thank you for sharing your imagination with us.

Um. I'm going over to A03 because it looks like you've updated over there sooner than here, you're still there and you are still around did you ever finish this story? It can't be left like this!

I dream about Jasper all the time... You've definitely given him what he deserves, this is what he should have been in Canon, not Alice's lap dog!

OMG BEST STORY EVER AND BEST CHAPTER IN THE BEST STORY EVER! I swear this is the BEST JASPER I've ever read and I have read some Jasper/Bella fic.

I love this story! Hope you update soon!

comeback and finish your story. please.