| Reviews for The Warlord |
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   valfreya81 chapter 34 . 9/4/2021 I absolutely love this story, I read it over and over again. it's got a good pace and detailed. I would have to have seen what Bella went through as a newborn. this is a piece of work you should be proud of. keep up the good work. |
| Sephrenia1 chapter 1 . 5/30/2021 I do hope you will be able to return to this story. |
| naturallystrongwoman chapter 5 . 5/11/2021 This is where I have to stop... Jaspers thoughts of women puts me off... He wants Bella to be opinionated, but not towards him, because he does as he pleases and she has to accept that OR ELSE! The threat was especially confusing after his promises that he could never hurt her! It just doesn’t make sense! And I love BDSM, but it has to be a decision made by both participants, otherwise it’s an abusive toxic relationship! |
| Granny Wolf chapter 34 . 4/4/2021 34 chapters and 8 years you still haven't posted the ending! Pity! |
| kara2lucy11 chapter 34 . 12/20/2020 Please stop using costumes when you mean Customs. they are very different and I'm just picturing vampires dressed up as cartoon characters. |
| LadySixx chapter 26 . 11/24/2020 I love that you gave the women power in that regard it was funny to listen to the name for Carman |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/31/2020 There are 7 continents |
| Dazzlingsparkle chapter 5 . 10/17/2020 he is an ass! patriarchal! |
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/30/2020 More .. |
| witchyred chapter 34 . 6/18/2020 Just recently was told about this story & was not disappointed in how good it was! A little confusing at times... you offer A LOT of info on laws, background, customs, etc of vampire & Volturi life that was really interesting. I really hope you come back some day to finally finish this story off once & for all. We more or less KNOW Jasper won't accept anything else but a HEA, but it still would be nice to see. Amazing work. |
| NUCGIRL72 chapter 34 . 5/13/2020 Please finish... 7 yrs... |
| AnneMargaret64 chapter 34 . 4/25/2020 please write more it very good |
| Melikalilly chapter 34 . 4/3/2020 I love this story and I hope that you decide to continue this someday |
| lashawn chapter 5 . 2/29/2020 I’m not sure how I feel about this story. I’m intrigued by the idea that Jasper is undercover Volturi. But I’m kind of put off by his attitude. I’m trying to rationalize his behavior because he is from a different time period, he isn’t human, he’s military and hardcore, plus his emotions are probably skewed even further by his gift. I will continue to read the story. I’m curious how his plan will unfold. Thanks for posting this. |
| Alixa cullen chapter 34 . 2/22/2020 Hola ojalá algún día decidas culminar esta maravillosa historia , felicidades y gracias |