Reviews for The Warlord
tinkermist99 chapter 34 . 6/10/2019
Plz update
chellekathrynnn chapter 2 . 5/29/2019
Have you finally abandoned this?!
Kristina777 chapter 34 . 3/14/2019
I love this story, will you be finishing it?
Ezza chapter 22 . 3/12/2019
As an active member of the church of satan and being part of the bdsm community i was laughing
Charlotte Salyers chapter 34 . 2/18/2019
are you planning on continuing this story?
jenn72stamper chapter 34 . 2/13/2019
please update this story
Guest chapter 9 . 1/9/2019
yall rlly hate alice huh. gotta love all that pent up misogyny. regardless, this is wildy ooc lmao
Jupiter Ascending chapter 34 . 12/20/2018
Continue please
jeoliverio chapter 34 . 12/15/2018
I love how you wrote this Major Jasper story, I think he is hot in this story.I also like how Bella finally got some back bone. It's not in a lot of stories, its usually the opposite. So I wanted to Congratulate you
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2018
Not trying to be there but witch: Hocus-pocus. /Which/ is the which you need
JupiterAscending chapter 34 . 10/31/2018
Please continue
Guest chapter 34 . 6/23/2018
great story! we're is the update ?
Guest chapter 34 . 5/10/2018
Ok but like where is the next chapter tho
Fukuro Senju chapter 16 . 4/14/2018
I have gotten this far. Which is surprising considering what I plan on saying. I apologise if this comes out as offensive to you. However, I do not like how similar this story is to your Marcus/Bella story. I have read that one twice and I had enjoyed it too. However, with this story it's like it's going on repeat except Jasper is the one who's doing it instead of Marcus. I may seem bias because Jasper is my favorite character of the Twilight series with Marcus as a close second, but this has disturbed in ways that I don't know what to say other than I'm not liking how this is going.

This Jasper is too OOC for me to handle. If you had integrated how Jasper was originally in the books and movies with how you did his character I this story, then I wouldn't he complaining all that much. However, I can't say the same with Bella because I have never liked her character all that much to begin with. I always preferred Rosalie and Leah over Bella. However, I gotta say that I feel bad and pity this Bella that you're using for Jasper.

So, with that being said, I'm gonna stop here and move on to another story before it gets too out of hand. Hopefully, what I said hadn't deterred anyone else from enjoying this story to it's fullest.
CLKit chapter 13 . 4/8/2018
Okay so I am in LOVE with your version of the Volturi! I am so excited for them to meet Bella. And Marcus and Alice!? I wonder how she's gonna take that when she finds out lol
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