Reviews for The Warlord
WhitlockFan4ever chapter 34 . 3/16/2016
update please, please, pretty please!
WhitlockFan4ever chapter 34 . 3/12/2016
I absolutely adore your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I really hope you're going to update soon, because it again and again just increase my love for the story :D
bbutterfly689 chapter 34 . 2/23/2016
I've reread this story again and it is still one of my favorites. . Luv the major
mayfairmarybeth chapter 34 . 2/5/2016
Really mis a this story! Hope u get back into it..
BellaAngelin chapter 34 . 2/2/2016
At the end of the last chapter you posted you said one more chapter to go...that was 3 years ago...please post the last one you were almost finished! PLEASE!
SAYAx13 chapter 9 . 1/15/2016
I think i hate your jasper in this story lol...
As much as i hate alice em was right on that punishing her like a savage ..
And what the heck how come he can have and fuck alice and any other woman he wants when he gets horny and bella cant fuck eddie when she use to get horny shit she gots needs to D'f he talking about nobody touches whats mine eehh... Swerve ninjaa
I would love your bella more if she gives him hell now as a human and as vampire too shit
You know grow a stronger back bone with Mr i can fuck anybody i want and you cant cause your mine M'f
And also i dont understand how she just finished saying that it was her life and she was the only one controlling it but yet jasper just finished giving her an order like ninjaa swerve lmao...
Kera Atchley chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
Amazing!
cela chapter 33 . 11/8/2015
this was an incredible chapter, the best yet. it showed who the monsters truly were, Edward and alice.
cela chapter 32 . 11/8/2015
bella, to cruel to Edward? I don't think so! he killed her father, he drugged her and dragged her away like a beast with a kill.
cela chapter 30 . 11/8/2015
the new order is positively medieval as far as women are concerned, but are modern morals all that good? I don't think so, with broken homes, abandoned and abused children and all the horrors of drugs and degradation. it's a terrible thing when women are at the mercy of outlaw men.
cela chapter 13 . 11/7/2015
that was very entertaining! "the water of love"? how appropriate.
IM LEAVING FF DONT STEAL IDEAS chapter 34 . 10/3/2015
Hi. Please update. I would love to read about Bella meeting the wives and the wedding. I love your Jasper.
southernpur-rica chapter 23 . 9/11/2015
Just refound this on here. Was reading on AO3 and still am, but I just can't wait! Great story!
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 18 . 8/26/2015
I think I should nag you about this story not being updated in so long. So Nag nag nag! Now will you do us all the major honor of updating this kick ass story? It is unique and has good flow.
Stelle's Pen chapter 2 . 8/9/2015
Okay, I'll admit that I've only read 2 chapters, but I must say that you are such an incredible writer! Somehow, reading your words is like watching a well-made hollywood movies, where everything was well-put together, the sound, the picture, the effect, EVERYTHING, and that's just from reading your word!
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