|Reviews for You'll Always Belong to Me|
| Danny vs A Month chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
She should have kept the crystal as something to remember her departing lover by.
| Stay88Frosty chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Hee. You have no idea how many times I've re-read this. Before I got an account here too. Nice work!
| SleepyCrimson Ninja chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
...and the get out to some bar/club and get drunk!...
kudos to you, i enjoyed reading this fic :D
| zerolight89 chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
its too bad dat serah still gonna marry snow _
| badkidoh chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
great story. I wonder if Snow would be alright with the Light/Serah thing
| E. G. Szyzlak chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
This won't exactly be a review, it'd be more like me making comments while I reread this. Hopefully it won't bloat into a giant ramble, so here goes!
I really love how you started this off. You said enough to perfectly place when this happens and I like how personal it sounds with the touches of Lightning in the narrative (her chipping in with a one-liner and her thoughts on the party).
Lightning daydreaming then suddenly realizing the dishes were done reminds me of a part in the novella, by the way. It was when she was dressing for work and thinking about her mother at the hospital, then suddenly she notices she was already dressed.
Haha, she still thinks of Snow as an idiot. I feel that's so her.
I love how the sisters talk to each other. They sound very comfortable and natural.
I think the "I love you," followed by the line about Snow was absolutely brilliant. It made me ask why there was a Snow to begin with if Serah still said those words the same way. Then you show exactly how Lightning has always been wrapped around Serah's finger. Serah initiated all that with the hug and Lightning just followed, doesn't matter that Serah's the one pinned and blushing. Sneaky girl.
- "No, she can't leave a mark. Not tonight anyway."
That there just -made- the whole prompt for me. Just... wow, that line just said so many things: about Snow, mostly, that he really is still there, but at the same time whatever Serah and Lightning have aren't about to stop. The fact that she's not completely abandoning the idea of marking Serah also ties nicely with Lightning threatening to take Serah away from Snow. Brilliant!
- Serah tries, and fails, to stifle a moan.
Another line I adore! You say so much with so little words. Maybe you didn't intend it this time, but that to me was a reflection of Serah and Lightning's relationship, of how both of them try to stop it and fail, but in the end it's like they never really wanted to and happily give in.
Lightning acts different with Serah. She's more playful (the smile, the snicker, the grinning), and she's even somewhat of a tease. I believe it and I like it, that she can be that kind of lover, especially when she shows just how possessive she is (that growl was sexxxy).
And Serah loving that possessiveness? Guh. Yes, guh. I can't think of another word, but that's definitely a sound of approval because that's hot. It makes it twice as delicious that Lightning just -knows- it's a part of Serah Snow will never see.
- Shame. What a waste.
Lightning snark! You managed to squeeze all of her in this one-shot, it's amazing, haha.
You don't need to be told how perfect a climax that is, do you? The whole thing was delightful. It was also at this point that I noticed how Serah was never specifically described as Lightning's sister, which just makes it even more compelling.
- She holds Serah on the way down, finding her lips to kiss just lightly at one point.
There you go again! Or am I reading into this too much?
And, aww, Lightning smiles for a second time.
The smoking reference amused me, then you say how Fang and Vanille should have been there with the rest in Oerba and Lightning's thinking about how little time she had left with Serah and now I'm sad.
I liked the conversation between Snow and Lightning. You didn't turn him into a villain or a jerk, instead you stayed true to Lightning's word and accepted him as Serah's choice, grudging it may be, but that makes it sound even more like Lightning.
- "Maybe I'm troubled because you're getting married tomorrow. To my sister."
- "Still antagonistic, are we?"
Oh, wow, that's just... haha. Snow, if you only knew! That was excellent! It was practically a confession on Lightning's part but Snow's just so lovable dense and unassuming that his mind would never go there (but then I think of the game's ending...) Either way, that was very clever of you!
- But Serah also murmured his.
For a while, I thought Lightning was going to ask to keep the crystal (to keep a part of Serah with her), but now that I think about it, that would make it look like she'd be letting Serah go completely by settling with the crystal.
- "I'll take Serah away from you, and make sure you never see her again."
Then you do that, and now I'm a puddle of goo on the floor. That's exactly why Lightning doesn't need to keep the crystal. I seriously love this story and all the things you let me read between the lines.
- "You really know which buttons to push."
I can say the same for you, dear author!
- Life without Serah isn't much a life at all.
Gah, I'm almost done here and you're still giving me all these lovelies!
- For the time being.
Matches perfectly with my favorite line!
It's so bittersweet for Lightning. I love that she wasn't resentful about this and even has it in her to actually joke and have a drink with Snow. There was no malice at all, even with Lightning knowing she can take Serah back any time. I also like how the sibling issue wasn't really addressed, that whatever's between Serah and Lightning is a big, big blur.
I feel bad for her, I do, but she's strong enough to handle it. I think that's why the ending made me smile, too.
Amazing, amazing read. I -loved- this, and hopefully somewhere in this giant babble, I've managed to tell you just how much!
| Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
Well, well, soldier...
B-E-A-Utiful! LOEVly! FLUFFy! WAFFy! And ever-so bittersweet! ToT
Goddamn Snow! A (Sigh)
A beautiful yet heart-wrenching piece.
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
| SuzakuSama chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Hi, this is the OT6 Writer! :D
I like how you added that last scene, and you could always add on a kink meme, even if my fics don't exactly fulfill the definition.
Anyways, the thought of Light leaving Serah with Snow is always bittersweet to me so good job.
| False Shepard chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Serah will always say Lightning's name (real or not) first. At least, that's how I see it.
I remember reading this on LJ, I really like the addition you made to it, heartbreaking at the same time. Yes, time like those when you just want Snow out of the picture.
| YuukixM chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
I absolutely adore your writing, I remember reading this on livejournal and falling in love with it, along with One Last Time :)
These one-shots are so heart wrenching and it just makes me wish Snow would just go die in a hole and leave Light and Serah together :( Sigh. Only in my dreams. Really hope you'll continue writing more farroncest fics though!
| Obsessivetoapoint chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
This is the first story I've read for FFXIII and I've got to say it was absolutely brilliant! I've already been converted to Lightning/Serah. :D
| WildWolf7 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
I just love possessive Lightning! Nice read! I enjoyed it all the way through. Are you ever gonna make a multichaptered Farroncest? :D
| jquackers chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
"But Serah also murmured his." That broke my heart just a bit. Really strong sentence. It's so bittersweet, how she loves both of them, probably equally.
I like the end. It seems like Snow and Lightning will start to at least somewhat get along. Enough so that Lightning can deal with Snow for a longer time, without his life being risked every second.