Reviews for Come Close To Perfection
SourSugarQuills chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
This is Good... :D

Ice should, like have 3 Mav for a while... That should be his weakness...

This is Great, though!
vice17 chapter 2 . 7/1/2010
Great beginning. It's fun the way you get into Mav's head and all we hear is "ICE!". :-) Hope you update soon.
xX12Xx chapter 2 . 6/9/2010
This is amazing! I love the way you seem to get inside Mav's head and the ways you discribe Ice? Priceless! xD

REALLY looking forward to reading the rest of this.
SweetChi chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
Enjoying the story so far! I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
lil-blah chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
A really great chapter...

There are not many fanfics in which Iceman is so perfectly described.

I'd really like to read more of it...
rhythm-within chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Awesome start already. Can't wait for more. :D
Writenintheshadows chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Whoa! Perfect story so far. Your description of Iceman reminded me a lot the actor himself (Val Kilmer) about the perfection thing.

First best line: "It would just make him happy that it bothers you so much being in second place behind him. And the last thing we want is making Iceman happy, isn't it? After all he could melt…" - Jesus! This guys 'love' him!

Second best line: Probably not important enough to be visible on Ice's radar. Stupid, arrogant, self-centred son of a bitch. - This is so Maverick like.

This story worth it's title: but it will become perfect if Maverick don't stay between Ice anda Slider, but you already know I'm a fan of this last pair, right?

Keep up!