|Reviews for Last Dance|
| iMissHP chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
It's tragic, sad and heartbreaking. You wrote them wonderfully, I love it!
| this-girl-with-glasses chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
I got your messeage and decided to come back reread and review your story most of the time when I read a story I don't come up with a good review other than 'update soon :)' but since you asked..
I like how you portrayed Teddy and how open he is to Lily, he wasn't afraid of rejection and just out right told her to marry her fiance, also the way you portrayed Lily in how she doesn't want to hurt her cousin or her fiance or family in any possible way I think is brilliant but I did find the ending kind of sad in how she says what we think is her final goodbye to Teddy (at least I hope its not her final goodbye). This story was really well written and you should continue to write this pairing. I hope the review was good and I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier. Keep up the awesome writing :)
| xoxtruegryffindorxox chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
:'( update soon x
| MileyKapri chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
NOO! WHY! Well written.. Now i'm depressed.. who's she marrying? just some dude?