|Reviews for Holding Pattern|
| BlueDiamondStar chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
I so enjoyed this story
| Stroma chapter 13 . 8/9/2010
| januarysunshine13 chapter 13 . 7/10/2010
I'm just a week old in White Collar fandom, & glad that I came to this fic. Really good job. The near death experience and the repeated nightmares along with it were described amazingly. I hope all ur other stories would be as good as this one. I would really like to read, something like ; it's a possibility now that Neal would develop some kind of long term respiratory condition like asthma and how he copes with it and in the same time working with the FBI; how the Burkes' help him and his growing bonding with Peter and El...Just some more way to Neal whumpage...Take care!
| JaneConstantine chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Perfect way to end the chapter! Good cliffie!
| tsisdu chapter 13 . 5/19/2010
Oooh. Someone who knows the difference between starting and startling and uses it correctly! I worship at your feet. The story is really interesting also. Very complex and different with the ocean imagery repeat. Nice job. I do miss a 'waking up in the hospital' scene in the last chapter.
| Sparky Dorian chapter 13 . 5/18/2010
Awww! I love it! :) That was perfect. The repeated drowning scenes were awesome too. Well done.
| Ursula4x chapter 13 . 5/18/2010
Hard to let this one go. It was a rollercoaster ride.
| Wondo chapter 12 . 5/18/2010
My favorite chapter. Neal's fear of prison and mistrust of the federal agent. You should write a preseason story...
| Olimka chapter 13 . 5/18/2010
wonderful wonderful this fic was wonderful i liked it sooooo much and i repeat again and again i liked it, so plis can you will do a new fic soon? plis, ciao
| j3nnee chapter 13 . 5/18/2010
Someone told me I ended this a bit abruptly.
Let me know what you think and I'm glad everyone's enjoyed the ride so far. :D
| JeanneZ84 chapter 13 . 5/18/2010
This chapter was just a bit confusing to me,considering in the last chapter Neal had a stroke then got stabilized and now he's out of the hospital? Did I miss something?
How can this story be completed?
| JeanneZ84 chapter 12 . 5/18/2010
I am sure Peter can not wait til Neal is back to his Mischeivious self.
Peter has gotten so used to that side of Neal,he misses it when this kinda thing happens.
| Sparky Dorian chapter 12 . 5/18/2010
*sniff* Sweet and sad. I loved it. Elizabeth was so nice to him, helping, and they all seemed really in character. I think that's a perfect way to describe how Neal would feel and act if this happened.
| Writer's-BlockDP chapter 12 . 5/18/2010
Just a little note... it was carbon monoxide poisoning, right? That's CO, not CO2. CO2 is carbon dioxide.
Otherwise, great job! Keep up the good work!
| Ursula4x chapter 11 . 5/17/2010
All manner of twists and turns! I'm enthused.