|Reviews for Hercules: Twilight|
| GeeklyChic95 chapter 9 . 7/13/2011
i lovee it!
| moonrae6 chapter 9 . 10/5/2010
that was fantastic! I was so excited when i found your story because i have been looking for a twilight/hercules story. I've been waiting to read it all day long since i didn't get a chance to last night so i thank you for putting up such a fantastic story!
| SinginginThirds chapter 4 . 5/18/2010
Wow! I'm REALLY loving this story!
I haven't watched Hercules in AGES but I remember it was my favourite Disney movie. I never realised how hilarious Walt Disney was... And sexual.
"Take me, I'm yours." ~Cough~
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UDPATE SOON!
Just a bit of constructive criticism:
I think you should change the plot slightly. Not completely and totally ruin the whole story that is Hercules like some other FanFictions.
Just mix up parts of it so it doesn't seem like this is just Hercules with the Twilight names.
For example, make your Bella slightly more like Twilight Bella. Of course, you can't make her clumsy and awkward otherwise it destorys the character of Meg.
Twilight Bella was sort of withdrawn (ie. shield) but was quick to fall in love with gentlemanly acts which Hercules Edward could do more.
Hope that helps! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| veryfinechardonnay chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
Hahah! I love that song at the end! XD
| veryfinechardonnay chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Lol! I like it :p