Reviews for The Predatory Wasp
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
I absolutely LOVED it! :)

Short, but sweet and cute.
Butterfree chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
That was so cute! Though wasps sting, not bite XD

Ben chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Me myself as a teenage boy who likes other boys actually really liked this made me feel pretty happy XD considering this is also my OTP lol anyways i think it was really good please make another!
bloodysword99 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
JAke chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I liked this fic alot!, it's so as Mihashi and Abe, that's what I like the most :D I'm gonna read your others fics :O
0987654321poiuytrewqlkjhgfdszx chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
xD Cute!~
Clover-tan chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
*downloads song*

Ok, so I'm not trying to sound mean or anything, but here's some suggestions.

The kissing scene and other scenes, I think using 'he' instead of the names more often is better.

Also, this is a oneshot and I really liked it, but it was a little bit rushed? Like from baseball, to sting, to sudden kiss. A teensy bit rushed maybe? More description of the scenes would be great. :D

Overall, I really enjoyed this and I hope you don't take my criticism the wrong way. Great job~!

*download has reached 40%*... *the internet has disconnected* NOOOOO~ D8 Sorry, that was random, though it did just happen.
StarFixation chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Well, it may have been short, but was fluffy and cute. i like it.