|Reviews for Apple Picking|
| Gruvia and NaLu 4 life chapter 1 . 7/10
I. Love. It!
| S.W chapter 1 . 2/9
Very nice. Well written.
| Ghost hunt.er loves japan 77 chapter 1 . 1/10
I loved the idea of apple picking genius! And sure a cute sweet fun story and as always well written to.
| Matharose111612 chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
That was adorable! So f-ing cute!
| Shawn Raven chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
Cute. Absolutely cute. :D
Perfectly what you'd expect from a simple past time of apple picking between these two lovebirds. ;)
| YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Sleeping beauty? Is that a pun using Disney princess names? Because her name means Snow white.
| The Lonely Serenade chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
One word: AMAZING!:)
Oooow, I love the Shirayuki and Zen pairing so much! Keep writing.:D
| ColinatorGX chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Great story~! Seamless narration that feels dynamic, combined with the rather romantic feel makes for a very good story.
| LittleCopperRidingHood chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
super cute! loved the part were Zen was compairing apple colors. lol!
| Cloner4000 chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Ahh..Apple trees..very fitting...Wonder if Kiki like Mitsuhide from the manga, it's a bit hard for me to tell.
| Dancing-Souls chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Wow I loved this it was beautiful and showed Shirayuki's determination in whatever she trys to do so thanks and good job!
| IshtarAli chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Great story, liked your own little twists. Sorry i didn't get to read it before I was out of town for about 3 weeks. Keep up the great work though.
| HowdyDoody chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
That was awesome~
Write more, okay~?