|Reviews for Curtains|
| ordinary vamp chapter 5 . 3/18/2012
I'm finding it difficult to like Edward. He's such a d-bag. But I can almost understand why he is the way he is, because grief makes us sort-of stupid, sometimes. This line stuck out the most, for me: "Like gaudy neon letters flashing above her head." It made the desire Bella had for E into something seedy and dirty, instead of the beautiful it truly was. I liked this peek into Edward's head.
| ordinary vamp chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
Oh, the relationship they have! I really can't help but dislike Edward. He's so... arrogant. Gah!
Your writing is always poetry. It *flows*. It's evocative. I love it.
| BD from Germany chapter 25 . 3/16/2012
I'm speechless, this story is so emotional. I was so caught by Bella's and Edward'd emotions as if it was me. Amazing!
| dbpbatm chapter 25 . 3/5/2012
Beautiful read. Thank you for sharing it.
| kristyv chapter 25 . 3/1/2012
They've come full circle. There was some painful chapters to read but I enjoyed seeing the obvious change in the characters between chapters. Very touching. I like how you created this story without delving deeply into details but it was just the right amount to keep reader enthralled. Great fic :)
| kristyv chapter 5 . 3/1/2012
It's sad to see Edward this broken and so cold towards Bella but i'm hoping over time they grown closer and stronger together
| MalloryKnoxx chapter 24 . 2/29/2012
"Even as I want to consume her, and slide into her, fold myself over her and escape inside her til I forget who I am, I do in fact… love her"...You know how there's always a part of the story that you never forget? For me, this is that. The words that I run over in my head as I revisit this fic for the third, maybe fourth time-who's counting at this point. The part that makes me smile and let out a contented sigh of relief. The part that makes me feel...just so...
| pauleen chapter 25 . 2/20/2012
This one of the most touching stories on fanfiction. This is my second time reading this story. It was quick yo the point cathartic. Thanks for writing it.
| Ladyniki chapter 25 . 2/15/2012
Love that she ended up next to him, in his bed. Wanted...loved even. Full circle!
Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
| Ladyniki chapter 24 . 2/15/2012
"Like a flower I open her, petal by petal, just as pretty, just as soft. I won't go slow when she lets me inside, but I can go slow now, knowing after this the then will be over and we'll be forever in the now." I put this on my twitter.
I was so gone after this chapter. When he says it wasnt his intention to " love" her in this bed. I get shivers...
| Ladyniki chapter 23 . 2/15/2012
I am in shock with b about this confession as well. It seemed to come out of nowhere. I guess after so many years of showing no emotion or feeling, when you are in love you want to say it asap!
| Ladyniki chapter 21 . 2/15/2012
Is it wrong that i'm laughing at jake? Yeah it probably is! He's got to be wondering wtf? Also, I am dreamy swooning with b...especially when e puts his chin on her shoulder!
| Ladyniki chapter 20 . 2/15/2012
That kiss on the cheek...*sigh* Turned me into a pile of moosh!
| Ladyniki chapter 19 . 2/15/2012
What is it about dudes and sex in cars? Lmao I'm glad b accepted the ride and i cant blame her for being so weary. Why should she put herself out there again?
| Ladyniki chapter 16 . 2/15/2012
Awww its love when the loud burps come out!
This " Because I'm drawn to you, I wanted to say. I was drawn to you even when I didn't want you and now I do want you and I'm drawn to you even more." ommfg...warm me up from my head to my toes! Closed my eyes and felt like warm embrace in that little sentence!