Reviews for Curtains
Guest chapter 2 . 4/24/2014
Ophelia85 chapter 10 . 4/23/2014
Not digging this Edward at all...
Guest chapter 21 . 4/17/2014
I love Jacob in this story and I despise Edward, sorry but I do. He takes Bella for granted, is always in a crappy mood (talk about moodswings) whereas Jacob is such a gentleman and a wonderful person. Edward's a complex character, but he's just so self-absorbed at times. I'm sure he isn't all the time but to a third person who's reading this, Edward does seem like a very flawed character.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/17/2014
I just wish Bella could stand up for herself more. As women, why do we always subject ourselves to people who don't love us back (though maybe this is just in stories.. in real life I guess we friendzone males more). But honestly, the ratio of girls-loving-guys-that-don't-notice-them to guys-loving-girls-that-don't-notice them is so unequal and I just wish it leaned more towards the latter. Anyway, wonderful story. Good writing.
Faeraei chapter 25 . 3/6/2014
Not sure how Bella can NOT visualise Edward with Tanya... I would find it disturbing.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
Poor Bella
Guest chapter 25 . 1/30/2014
I would never want to be with this Edwad. I must feel I'm the most important woman in my man's life. That I'm first and only. If I was Bella I would feel like I was second best, like I was a woman like any other woman, he fucked them and he fucked me and that's all.
ReaderKat chapter 25 . 1/20/2014
Enjoyed your story, achingly sad premise but I liked how you so artistically brought it all together. Thanks for sharing.
missmelly chapter 25 . 1/4/2014
Good lord. That was... heartbreaking. And quietly amazing. I liked this Bella a great deal, and she's not often a character I find sympathy with. This Edward isn't as likeable, but he seems more realistic. Thank you for sharing your wonderful words.
Mell C chapter 24 . 11/19/2013
Some how I had never read this one. How bittersweet. I'm glad they've both healed a great deal and can think of Rosalie and Emmett and the parts of life connected to them with some fondness. And I'm glad that they found love in each other.

I'm not sure if I'm reading to much into it, or if you intended to, but B and E fooling around in the car creeped me out for a second, because I wondered if this is what happened to Rose and Emm. I think most people would leave the keys in the ignition while they fooled around in the back. But then I realized that his was a truck and right by the side of the road, and that I was being weird. But I'm a bit sad that they're just gone. Glad Bella and Edward are at peace with it.

Thanks for a touching story.
Shae Maen chapter 23 . 11/10/2013
Gosh, I read this story of yours like every few months because I love it so much! Always have always will! This chapter is my favourite. Probably because of how raw Bella feels at being second best to a girl whom the guy she loves is in hits me too close at home. I really like how well you portray the emotions and you truly are my most favourite writer in Twilight Fanfiction! Even beat Stephenie Meyer to be honest! Lots of love, Shae
Northern Light1000 chapter 23 . 10/31/2013
So sweet!
REgrrl chapter 25 . 10/1/2013
Bittersweet and yet promising. A unique perspective which is at times painful, hopeful and part damage control. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 25 . 9/16/2013
Loved it! So glad they found their way to each other, despite all that they went through to get there. I must admit that I am sad that there was no closure for Emmett and Rosalie - that has to be every parent's worst nightmare. Happy that Edward came around, and Bella was able to find the love for him she sort of always had. They both got therapy and learned to move on. Happy that it was together! Thanks again for sharing this with us!
Guest chapter 24 . 9/16/2013
Your words are always so beautiful! Especially at the end of this chapter!
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