hey my readers if you can see this i have not forgotten about this story. I've written several chapters actually but ive never gotten a chance to start typing them. So just to let you know im still here and expect a few chapters by the end of summer ( yes im still very busy ) _

after reading this i saw some grammer errors i apoligize for that i was half asleep while i was typing this. (yeah note to self dont type when your half asleep _ )

once again a really good chapter and a nice description of what the main character looks like and honestly the story line reminds me of the beginning of silent hill 2 but whatever lol anyway this is a really good chapter in general

nicely done. was suspenseful and the way that you have it written out it feels like i put myself in the story rather than reading about a character or something

dude i am proud of you man this is pretty good. just make sure that your future chapters are longer ok lol. anyways good story so far

Good start! Very creepy.