|Reviews for The adventures of G and M|
| Ophelia Hall chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
1. Never seen any of the predator moveis. (Had to look up a picture of what a Predator looked like.)
2. I rarely read stories that are not about an anime or have an OC in them.
So, why am I reading it you ask? Simply because I know you wrote this story and it would be good. And it is. :) I shall continue reading it and I can not wait for the next chapter!
And if I may, please allow me one constructive criticism. You should look for a beta reader because there are spots in the story that make little sense. The point gets across but it would be best if you can get someone to edit the parts that need it.