|Reviews for Conlaodh's Song|
| BillBrink chapter 13 . 10/20
Imaginative, original, good characterizations, fast paced. What more could you want? Thanks for sharing it.
| mrmayortheiv chapter 13 . 9/13
This fic and the prequel were awesome. I suppose that should be a given since you ARE the same person who wrote Skitterleap. (I have honestly no idea why I didn't read these months ago after I read that one). I wish that the story had been finished, or at least that you didn't leave it with that huge mystery at the end. I think I could have handled it if not for not knowing who is going with them.
I suspect Ron and Snape... but honestly those are both far-fetched guesses.
By the way, I really appreciate your ability to make me have some sympathy/empathy for the (usual) bad guys. You do a masterful job of making them still kind of assholes, while being humans not malevolent creatures. I can't generally express my hatred for Snape and Umbridge's, but they weren't bad in this one.
Also, loving the mentor-Albus. I have gotten a little weary of the evil Dumbles trope lately.
FINALLY, thank you for writing extremely interesting AUs, I'm tired of canon retellings, time travel fics, romance stories, etc. These are a huge breath of fresh air.
| natero chapter 13 . 2/26
You sir, are an incredible writer. I love the way you diverge from canon, and you do a great job of writing a strong Harry without making him infallible. I also really enjoyed your characterization of Albus Dumbledore. By writing him as good hearted but not perfect, I think that you stay closer to Rowling's vision, and it makes your plot better. You weave a superb plot, and I cannot help but hope that you will put out a sequel. A masterpiece like this deserves a true ending.
| ArcaneMaverick chapter 1 . 2/6
Why didn't you finish anything or give a synopsis of what you intended to happen you fucker?
| omh666 chapter 13 . 11/1/2016
Is there going to be more to this at any point? It was an excellent read.
| omh666 chapter 9 . 11/1/2016
Do you know that last chapter you had the captain from the books, Angelina, as captain. Then in this chapter you changed the captain to Katie?
| SarcasticallySatyrical chapter 13 . 8/14/2016
I'm absolutely loving how these stories are developing. I cannot wait to read the next continuation. I will admit, sometimes the plot is a bit obscure and there's a lot that the reader doesn't understand very well that happens all at once, but usually you managed to clear it up quite easily by the end.
| Hippothestrowl chapter 13 . 8/3/2016
Horrible. There were some great passages but so much was missing that the story was ruined. The ending was not an ending and the Story should not have been marked Complete so then I wouldn't have seen it. Dreadfully disappointing. I'd rather start a poorly-written story and give up early than have my hopes raised and dashed so mercilessly. Frankly, I think the author was playing with us deliberately.
| Hippothestrowl chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
A fine opening chapter; well-written and believable. I wonder what comes next?
| Agravaine chapter 13 . 4/4/2016
I recently had cause to think of the first scene of this chapter, so I thought I'd drop a line to say how much I admire it. It seems like fanfiction primes us towards the notion that shared trauma and violence are the ties that bind, and this is a beautiful subversion of that trope. You convey so much with so little—Luna grappling with her role in events, their deep mutual affection, the unspoken acknowledgement of their diverging paths, Harry's stoicism against Luna's willingness to put voice to her fears, the manner in which she assumes control of their dynamic despite the imbalance of (literal and metaphoric) power between them . . . it's a complex and deeply touching scene.
| Lunaliceazreal chapter 13 . 3/26/2016
Nooo you can't end it this story is too amazing to end please make a sequal
| soccersack chapter 12 . 1/23/2016
Both this story and its prequel were fantastic. Sadly it seems unlikely to be continued, but hey-ho you never know.
Not sure why people are complaining about characters acting differently to canon. Firstly, its an AU fic... Secondly, its FANFICTION - Surely the whole point of writing is to deviate from the original plot / charater forms?
As someone previously stated ' pet hate ' hahaha ;)
| nony chapter 13 . 4/6/2015
man oh man - great stories! Any thoughts about doing a part three for this series?
| esran chapter 13 . 11/16/2014
This story was just incredible. Ordinarily overly powered Harry's annoyed me, but you managed to create an incredibly powerful character, and still give him worthy challenges. Too bad this looks unlikely to get a sequel. I still have no idea who "she" is, and who the two people on the floor are.
| kira and light chapter 13 . 8/26/2014
Sorry but i just have to mention how ooc your Snape (he is far more of a bastard) was, everytime Harry calls him Severus I actually winced a bit (pet peeve of me)