|Reviews for Awakening|
| nayukiamnesia chapter 1 . 2/18
haha backround yay! i was stupid and didn't read this first just found it today actully haha... silly me.
| acrisafu chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
Woah awesome story! Can't wait to read the other 2! :D
| Oz The B-rabbit chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
I WANT MORE **
| Firediva0 chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
Ohh. I wonder how Mana would react to his feelings?
Mana:I'll bring him to hell with me.
Me:He's your brother!
Mana: What of it? No one touches my son!
Me:I don't know about that.(calls out to Neah)
Me:Go get him!
Neah:Don't have to tell me twice!(grabs allen and runs away)
Mana: Come back here!(chases after Allen and Neah)
You can feel the love!
| Elinae chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
| mamita chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Hello, I really like the couple NeahxAllen, or do other fics of them, thanks and kisses
| The Accomplice chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
I loved it! I read Broken White first and was so glad I found this one. It's fantastic!
| DearAgony chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Pedophilic incestic lust crazed Neah!
And he is still fucking hot,and just a smidge more.
| Mukuro234 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
I love this
| RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I adored this fic thanks
| shiarein chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
If mana had known... If only... Over protective mana..
| Blake C chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
In the 14th's defense, my granddad fell in love with his adopted neice. My family is so mixed up thanks to his love as a young man. Anyway, since it hppened, I really don't see loving a family member as a big deal. My brother is in love with our cousin. My friend is in love with his sister.
| azab chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
i loved it a lot
| Melodien chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
lovely! thanks for sharing
| Yggdrasil299 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
that was an amazing story! :D
please write more?