Reviews for All I needed
michelepotter7 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Great story
Please update soon
Clarrisa chapter 12 . 6/18/2013
Awesome story can't wait for update
Smiley chapter 12 . 5/2/2011
Great story!

I think you captured Snape's personality amazingly well! :D

An excellent piece of writing! ;)
Andrea999 chapter 12 . 10/24/2010
please update soon :))
wildreams chapter 12 . 9/2/2010
simple, straight to the point and funny at times. This is good :)Enjoy writting more
rawles31 chapter 12 . 7/24/2010
please keep going x
Lord-Cas chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY! great job
cassie chapter 12 . 7/17/2010
this is an awesome story its super good i wanna hear the rest :)
SNAPE4 chapter 12 . 7/8/2010
I really love this story. please up-date soon
Minx1993 chapter 12 . 7/8/2010
I love it hope you update soon
Minx1993 chapter 11 . 6/27/2010
i love it hope you update soon
Jenea chapter 11 . 6/22/2010
I'm enjoying your story. And I don't worry about MarySue's which I don't think Bow is. There is a few twist in her charm and personality and I look forward to more.
SweetieCherrie chapter 10 . 6/7/2010
hilarious, snape is the master of detention!
Very Small Prophet chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Genuine Constructive Criticism: If you want people to believe your Original Character isn't a Mary Sue, avoid giving her an off-the-wall name like "Bow." Instead, give her an ordinary name, recognizably feminine. Something like "Helen" or "Janet" or even "Mary." Original Character "Helen Johnson" might well turn into a Mary Sue, but at least she would have a fighting chance to avoid it. "Bow Hartwell", on the other hand, will be blown off as a Mary Sue before the first sentence of her story is read. Technically it's unfair, but it is such a reliable Mary Sue identifier that readers will dismiss such heroines even in the rare cases when the criticism isn't valid.
rawles31 chapter 9 . 6/1/2010
excellent, please update soon :-)
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