|Reviews for For The Love Of The King|
| jk chapter 25 . 9/10
funny that Edward has not once thought about how the women he supposedly loves feels about him having a five year old son. I'm actually pretty mad that he hasn't thought about it...it effects bella too! and its like he doesn't give a fuck about bellas feelings. I would imagine it to be pretty hard on a women to not be able to give the man she loves his first child expecially since she is pregnant RIGHT NOW and that's what she thought she was doing, giving him his first child...then BAM whores kid shows up at the door and Edward doesn't say shit to bella..no I'm sorry I'm such a skank. sorry I'm so used up and gross nothing...
I have no respect for your main characters...you've ruined your own story
| jk chapter 22 . 9/10
how can bella be just fine with this? hes got a fucking kid! a whores kid too.. id feel betrayed here she was thinking she'd have his first child...living anyway then bam he already has a son...id fucking leave if I was her
| jk chapter 3 . 9/10
he was married to Tanya? was gonna have a kid with her? he thought she was pretty? omg I'm gonna throw up. Has no one seen Tanya? seriously? shes the ugliest denali...shes so gross ewww I hate Edward/Tanya stories...
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 34 . 9/4
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/11
This story is the most boring 'drama/small parts angst' I think I've ever read.
| Guest chapter 21 . 5/11
Urhh, ruined the story for me. Will not be reading any more.
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/11
Haha oh god that was truly over the top. Made me laugh actually.
| jk chapter 3 . 2/24
He married Tanya! And she was so pretty and funny? Yaaa and I'm out! Fuck tanya
| NY13 chapter 34 . 4/19/2014
not a bad story - but the action didn't blend very well to a certain point - just wasn't very cohesive
| MatingInspires chapter 34 . 2/17/2014
Thanks for sharing!
| breannlovesvampires chapter 3 . 1/19/2014
how old is edward
| Toni Masen chapter 34 . 10/29/2013
Not a bad story at all, nicely lemony! From chapter 31 the story got a bit confusing and I had to back track to make sure I hadn't missed a chapter, it was too rushed towards the end.
| Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 34 . 8/3/2013
| Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 33 . 8/3/2013
| Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 32 . 8/3/2013