|Reviews for For The Love Of The King|
| Manasseh chapter 11 . 12/30/2017
I’m a bit confused... Why aren’t they married? For time period you’re writing this, wouldn’t a bastard be illegitimate to hold any position of power/authority?
| tickledpinkstamper chapter 3 . 1/27/2017
I am confused, why are they together? They are not married, so why does he have her with him? Please explain, because I just sit here reading and scratch my head trying to figure this out.
On another note, you use a space between the quotation marks and the sentance and it make it hard to read. It makes me want to pause every time. It is kind of like a stutter to me.
| tululah chapter 23 . 1/23/2017
I know this is an old story and I think the general plot is good. However I must say I am confused about the time period. Customs were very strict during Victorian or regency era. Scandal was to be avoided at all cost. A family would lose their standing for generations. This family seems to flaunt scandal.
At the beginning, Bella's father would have negotiated a marriage. He would not shame hie name by making her a whore and he would have wanted the child to be legitimate. There's no power in a bastard.
The addition of another bastard child seems overkill.
| dianscot chapter 2 . 11/12/2016
| jk chapter 3 . 7/31/2016
I'm sure everyone was happy to hear Edward talk about Tanya...saying how pretty and nice and funny she was...
and he got her pregnant!
I'm gonna stop reading this shit now...anything that has been inside tanwhore should NOT be inside bella
| jk chapter 2 . 7/31/2016
bella comes off as WAY to fucking clingy...and whats with the military installation? they all came to get bella? they just happened to be where bella was? Bastard children are elevated in station? since when? LOL
| jk chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
soooo... he got right to it...didn't even talk to her just grabbed a knife and took her like she was a whore...shes a chiefs daughter right? and hes a fucking noble...youd think hed be a gentleman...and no I don't mean "giving her pleasure"
and bella sure acted like a whore huh? if some strange dude...that was forced on me started touching me I don't think I would encourage him like she did.
and did they get married? surely a bastard wouldn't get that close to the king...and that's the fucking point isn't it?
with the way Edward just got right down to business I thought it was weird that he called her love afterwards and cuddled with her..
and even stranger was that bella wanted to stay with him...SHE DOESNT EVEN KNOW HIM
| jk chapter 3 . 1/13/2016
Tanya seriously? the ugliest denali? its really hard hearing him say that she was small and pretty. cause we all know how ugly the whore really is
| emmettandme chapter 4 . 12/13/2015
| magmom4 chapter 34 . 11/9/2015
| jk chapter 25 . 9/10/2015
funny that Edward has not once thought about how the women he supposedly loves feels about him having a five year old son. I'm actually pretty mad that he hasn't thought about it...it effects bella too! and its like he doesn't give a fuck about bellas feelings. I would imagine it to be pretty hard on a women to not be able to give the man she loves his first child expecially since she is pregnant RIGHT NOW and that's what she thought she was doing, giving him his first child...then BAM whores kid shows up at the door and Edward doesn't say shit to bella..no I'm sorry I'm such a skank. sorry I'm so used up and gross nothing...
I have no respect for your main characters...you've ruined your own story
| jk chapter 22 . 9/10/2015
how can bella be just fine with this? hes got a fucking kid! a whores kid too.. id feel betrayed here she was thinking she'd have his first child...living anyway then bam he already has a son...id fucking leave if I was her
| jk chapter 3 . 9/10/2015
he was married to Tanya? was gonna have a kid with her? he thought she was pretty? omg I'm gonna throw up. Has no one seen Tanya? seriously? shes the ugliest denali...shes so gross ewww I hate Edward/Tanya stories...
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 34 . 9/4/2015
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/11/2015
This story is the most boring 'drama/small parts angst' I think I've ever read.