Reviews for Snakeheads
Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 6 . 11/25/2014
VERY nice work, to say the least.
For me, a well-written crossover should fully use both elements of the crossover to their fullest extent- as opposed to having one side come in and tell the other some variation of ‘You’re being a complete idiot and need to deal with that like this’-; having alternate versions of the Goa’uld taking the place of the actual pagan gods for the summit was a complicated way to bring the SGC into contact with the supernatural, but I can’t fault the results, as each side learns that the universe is far more complicated than they expected and have good reason not to question the veracity of the other’s information.
The idea of the SGC ‘loaning’ two Tok’ra to two people on such short notice even manages to come across as plausible despite the unique nature of the current threat; even if they’re only provisionally accepting the idea that the Devil is coming to that hotel, the presence of the Asgard as independent sources gave the SGC a credible reason to work with the Winchesters on this crisis.
Subsequent events are handled very well, the Tok’ra taking in Sam and Dean’s unique perspectives and adapting them to deal with the situation facing them, and while I would have liked to see more of Mercury’s reasoning for summoning the Goa’uld to this world as additional ‘cannon fodder’, I suppose most of the gods just felt that the Goa’uld were expendable egomaniacs that they all wanted dead for usurping their associates’ titles (If humans can kill the gods, the Goa'uld should have been able to work something out; they might not be creative, but they're stubborn enough to keep trying).
Still, with the conclusion leaving the Winchesters with some familiar and unfamiliar allies as they begin the greatest hunt of them all, I think it’s safe to say that things are going to be VERY interesting in this version of the Apocalypse; keep up the great work!
claroso chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Bless you for writing this! It's perfect! There can never be enough Stargate crossovers. I'm gonna go start part 2 now.
klu chapter 6 . 4/21/2014
This was a Thoroughly enjoyable read and it was such an unusual idea - Winchester Tok'ra... But it makes sense that the brothers would be accepting that 'good' things could possess a person - look at Cas, even though he the exception and not the rule, in terms of Angels (since Dean oft says "Angels are dicks"). And they had carter vouching for the Tok'ra too. It didn't hurt that they got along with Dishon and Salim. I think if they had been blended with older sembiotes, ones that were less tolerant of their (especially Dean's) brashness, it might not have been so pleasant.

I also loved the Tok'ra saying that they learned the 'leave no man behind' from the Tau'ri and insisted on going back for Gabriel when Sam and Dean were just trying to get out of the hotel with Kali. I always wondered what happened with her once they got away... It's nice to think that she decided to help out and keep an eye on Lisa and Ben (and I do think Lisa lied and Ben is Dean's kid).
LeeMarieJack chapter 6 . 4/11/2014
Thanks for the picture of Teal'c in Bobby's kitchen. That makes me smile.
LeeMarieJack chapter 5 . 4/11/2014
There is nothing I like more than watching the Winchesters and other supernaturals dealing with the Natives. The natives, in this case, being SG-1, Ha, ha.
LeeMarieJack chapter 4 . 4/10/2014
Napping inside your own skin, interesting concept. I bet the Winchesters could come up with all kinds of advantages of sharing space with a Tok'ra if they worked at it.
LeeMarieJack chapter 3 . 4/10/2014
What lovely, complicated conversations they all have. Can't hardly tell the players without a score card.
LeeMarieJack chapter 2 . 4/10/2014
I enjoyed the meeting of the Gods from a slightly difference viewpoint, that of the Tok'ra. Also I love my Gabriel, he's my favorite Angel.
LeeMarieJack chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
Nice start to a fairly complex story line. I think I'll come along for the ride.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
I'm not a huge fan of AU, but this was very good. I didn't care for the tok'ra on stargate but this is a refreshing use of them as characters. Thanks for a great read.
edboy4926 chapter 6 . 4/22/2013
Good story
Looking forward to the sequel
Vi-Violence chapter 6 . 2/26/2013
Nice work.
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 6 . 8/14/2012
0oh AWESOME story. Going to read the sequel now.
PurpleMoon3 chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
"Dean hadn't heard that kind of swearing from a Fed since the last time he called Quantico to taunt Henricksen."

This is sooo something Dean would do. Love it.
GaelicAngel chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Oh I loved this and the thought of them being hosts just awesome and I can not wait too read the other parts.

Great story and some awesome writing.
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