|Reviews for Frozen Silence|
| Manon-de chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
This is exquisite. Seriously. You're not a native speaker? I honestly would never have guessed. You write wonderfully.
I never really paid that much attention to Ivory in the books; there were just so many other Dragon Corps members to love and he always faded into the background for me. Not so with this piece; he is magnificently, terrifyingly, fully realized, a person absolutely brimming with psychopathy and liable to be set off at the littlest misstep. I loved how you wound the piano into the entire piece and how it somehow tied in with the character's nature and actions. Raphael thoughts were spot-on, too; how do you go about loving a crazed, callous nut-job? This line just about sums it up for me: "Unconcerned, without passion or compassion." I don't think I'll ever be able to overlook Ivory in the books ever again.
Gah, I could babble on, I seriously could, but I just had to let you know how much I loved this. Well done, you. :)
| moosh chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Wow! This is very deep and heartbreaking. You wrapped it all up very well.
| Semjaza chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I like this, it's very well written. It's nice to see a story that deals with characters other than Rook and Thom, lol. And it's interesting to see just what might be happening under the surface, stuff that was never explored in the novel. Very nicely done! :D