Reviews for Clandestine
Qwual chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
This story has a exorbitant amount of high-quality vocabulary. Well done!
The Reality DumPer chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
I've already written a review before. But my phone restarted; I wasn't able to send it.
I think this is a really good story-just that i don't know what's great about it.
The only complaint is that it's got problems on some verb tense usage.
Overall, it's a really good one. A tearjerker too. (My original review was longer,but due to exhaustion it's summarized now.)
NoName chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
I friggin loved this so much! Best black vow fanfiction I've ever read, cause this one actually ended in them seeing each other again:-) thank you do much for writing this!
Clavemien Nigram Rosa chapter 3 . 3/31/2012
kagaminesimulator chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
This was such a great story! Although I've never been a fan of the RinxMiku couple, the song Alluring Secret ~Black Vow~ has been stuck in my head and I just had to find a fanfiction revolving around this. I thought this was extremely well written, and I'm a complete sucker for happy endings. This is an incredible story.
Hanarenai chapter 3 . 4/23/2011
I readed it in one sitting... :) it was good, nothing was missed. :D it was very descritive and I love it. I hope you make more vocaloid stories in the future, I will support it!

Lillet chapter 2 . 1/30/2011
YES to a part 2! But... Miku's already dead :c If your Liliane is actually Rin. It would be very interesting to read! I liked the story. Lots of stories relating to secret black vow is popping up everywhere, and in my opinion, yours is the best! Keep up the good work, and write more vocaloid fanfics plleeasseee. The world needs more of your fics )
ireneotaku chapter 3 . 7/5/2010
VocalRaynbow is really lazy chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
This last chapter was...good. I love how you finished up the story, but it seemed rather rushed compared to the other two chapters. Like you were impatient to get it done. Either way, it was great and I really enjoyed it. I look forward to more from you. c:
kazorashi chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Okay, gotta be quick. I really liked this story and I think you captured the MV perfectly. Though I'm not into yuri... this was nice
narcotic-lullaby chapter 3 . 6/8/2010
I loved it! Every single part of this story was great, from beginning to end. My favorite part about this chapter was the ending, since it was a happy ending I loved how you gave backfround stories about Kaito's and Rin's relationship as well as the flashbacks...wonderful story! Can't wait for anything more you come up with~!
Runa-Shickozi chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
At first chapter I was like I thought this was a Len x Miku story but then when I read on to the Len X Miku scene I loved it! X3
narcotic-lullaby chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
I loved this~! I actually feel kinda sorry for John, since all the drama occurred right after he got married...Again, loved the way you used the dialogue, and loved the way how you included other Vocaloids into the story. Can't wait for the next one!
narcotic-lullaby chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
I was wondering why there wasn't a fanfic based on this video either, especially since it's pretty old. I loved your view on this! It felt like this was the true story behind the music video and the details and language you used in the story fit with the setting perfectly. I can't wait for more, so please update soon!
VocalRaynbow chapter 2 . 5/26/2010
I love this so far. I'm not usually into RinxMiku, but this is wonderfully written. Plus I love the original song, sooooo.

I don't know why, but I imagined Miku as a gothic lolita that bakes cupcakes and sews. o.o; Fits, though. Haha.
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