Reviews for Silver and Gold
alwaysafangirl07 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Hey! There! I really think you're story is nice...

But I also believe it needs some improvement.

Do Nanjo and Inugami know each other from the start of the story? If they do not it would be nice if you can give the reader this mystery if who is this guy Nanjo is mad with.

Don't you think?

Don't give it all way from at the start of the story...

Intise readers with mystery...