|Reviews for Land of the Unborn|
| TrueBloodxTwilight chapter 4 . 3/1/2012
PLEASE keep writing
| Ollie912 chapter 4 . 2/19/2011
Great chapter :D
| Ollie912 chapter 3 . 1/1/2011
Interesting chapter :D
| MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 2 . 12/9/2010
will you yell at me if i write a story extremely close to yours? PM me IMMEDIATLY! i'll give you credit for the idea!
| fanpire12345678910 chapter 4 . 7/28/2010
UUUHHHHH loved it!
| Addie-Bri chapter 4 . 7/27/2010
please please please please update i love the story the plot is very original i can't wait for chapter 5 :)
| futurecullen26 chapter 4 . 7/25/2010
finally, u updated! great chapter, plz update faster
| fanpire12345678910 chapter 2 . 5/27/2010
LOVED THE NEW REWRITE! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN ! :D
| futurecullen26 chapter 3 . 5/18/2010
I loved the last line. Great chapter.
| fanpire12345678910 chapter 3 . 5/17/2010
I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY PLZZZZ HURRY AND UPDATE! SUCH AND ORIGINAL IDEA TO :D
| futurecullen26 chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
i luv ur stories. And BTW, have you ever noticed in the movies that when "Edward" kisses Bella his face is always scrunched up like he's concentrating on the kiss? I also agree: KS has NO emotion WHATSOEVER
luv the story.