|Reviews for Despair and Deliverance|
| rebecca-in-blue chapter 5 . 9/6/2010
Hot. Damn. That chapter was as smutty as they come (and I mean that in the best way!) but at the same time, this story goes much deeper than plain smut. It's not over, is it?
| diana teo chapter 17 . 8/31/2010
I've been playing catch up and enjoying every developement! All the Tiva fans must be cheering!
| Hannelovestiva chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
Yeah.. a date!
you got me hooked.. Great story..
Please update soon!
| girlskickass chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
Best chapter so far, great job. I love this story more and more at every update.
| GRACE5 chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
So I'm lazy and don't usually review but I love this story. But I must tell you I picked up the Hemingway book that was mentioned here yesterday and thought it looked good, so I've read a little but I had to lol when you said the guy dies. Any way update soon. lol
| browneyesonly4 chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
Dear Writers of NCIS,
I would like to first off direct you to wingsofenbarr's glorious fan piece, 'Despair and Deliverance.' This is how Season 8 is -supposed- to go. Second, I need you to understand that somehow, this girl has mastered the art of Tony DiNozzo and that you, writers of NCIS, have fallen short. Having not watched all of season 7 (and unfortunately will be unable to until my birthday in seventeen days) I suppose I do not quite know whether you have completely gotten to know his character or not.
However, I do know this much. Despair and Deliverance; I'm seeing a two-part episode, like, say, Judgement Day, in which ALL OF THIS HAPPENS.
Now for the review? Fabulous chapter. Thank you for posting this :) I would not change a thing.
| kiir33 chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
aww, that's so cute!
| Betherzz chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
great chapter... cant wait to see what comes next and if shes really gonna stick around or if shes gonna run again... tony i hope to hell has gotten through to her and made her see that he would give it all up for her
| bethanyanne chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
That was sweet. Can't wait to read about their first date.
| firstadream100 chapter 16 . 8/24/2010
This is really good! Keep updating!
| x-men are awesome chapter 16 . 8/24/2010
Great chapter! You're doing a great job on this story. Please continue it soon.
| xteamgibbsx chapter 16 . 8/23/2010
ooooo... me likey this chapter.
please update soon! and make sure eli david does more than incriminate himself.. i'd like to see him humiliate himself more than humanly possible.
| Betherzz chapter 16 . 8/23/2010
good chapter, cant wait to see what comes next and what else that bastard eli david has to say about ziva
| Jedicren chapter 16 . 8/23/2010
Such an exciting story, your characterizations are very true to form. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next chapter!
| bethanyanne chapter 16 . 8/23/2010
Another fabulous chapter, now maybe they can start to work through the problems... poor Ziva being used by her dad.