|Reviews for A Jewel in Henry's Crown|
| Gyb chapter 42 . 3/20
Great chapter on a jewel in Henry's crown, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please
| Sakura chapter 3 . 2/21
WTF! She 15 years old! What a heartless father! If she died child birth who going to blame.
| LadyHallows chapter 36 . 1/19
I do not mean any offense but it is totally out of character and Charlotte is a hypocrite and no longer a likable character. Katherine was just like her yet she condemns her and she had no reason to dislike Anne so without knowing her, though the latter is more understandable due to rumors. You have a fairly good plot idea but I think you need to develop it more and perhaps rewrite most of the book. This is advice, not hate and no harm is meant from it; I'm just trying to help you improve for yourself and your readers
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2017
Wow, this really sucks. Were you a 14 year old when writing this? Your protagonist Charlotte is a very messy, very unlikeable character for one. I know she is only 15. But God damn! I sure as hell wasn't THAT stupid and overly emotional at 15. One minute she is angry, the next she smiles when she so much as sees Brandon. Then she is going back to whining and throwing tantrums seemingly just for the sake of doing so it is so forced. And then rinse and repeat. Her emotions always seem to be all over the place and on top of that, she can't ever seem to control them. Really, the true problem is there isn't much depth or real personality to her character at all. And how Brandon literally just knew her for a few days before declaring he would do anything for her, further makes me think you are just a teenager yourself writing this mess. So really none of your characters have true personalities. And what the hell is the point of making Henry as a romantic interest if Charlotte had never even given a shit about him from the get go? Her mother was right, she wasn't easy on him and didn't give him a chance. Overall I give this messy ass story full of one dimensional characters with no real plot on top of it all, a big fat F-. This is a piece of steaming dog shit and you should either rewrite it once you have improved, or just delete this trash!
| Guest chapter 46 . 6/15/2016
I love your Story But my Faceebook won't work when I try the Fanpage
| Guest chapter 46 . 5/26/2016
Was that the end?
| Katexoxoluv chapter 46 . 4/10/2016
Please keep writing this story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
What a load of fucking shit, you need to research properly you ignorant dog turd.
| but the joke was on you chapter 46 . 11/18/2015
| Guest chapter 46 . 6/26/2015
update or REWRITING please
I want to know the end
| HPuni101 chapter 46 . 1/30/2015
This is my second re-read of your story. I hope you plan on finishing. Happy writing!
| casstawhai chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Read the whole thing so far and love it! Please keep writing it
| xXMoonlitSorrowsXx chapter 46 . 7/1/2014
Wonderful story. I hope you don't give up on it.
| xXMoonlitSorrowsXx chapter 34 . 7/1/2014
I am so confused. Why doesn't she like Katherine?
| Sayuri Kimiko chapter 46 . 11/2/2013
This story is amazing! One of the best i've found! Keep up the great work update soon!